Reviews for The Boy Who Planned |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, This was an enjoyable, well-crafted tale. I especially liked how your Harry systematically chipped away at DD's power base. Thanks, Old-Crow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely story. Thank you for sharing this story with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding. Harry’s cold bloodedness (sp?) works well here. Death scene was perfect. But the boy will need counseling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore the droll dialogue. I assume the Unspeakables cleared Sirius. I love your Amelia’s |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harsh outcomes but well deserved. I loved the no bs conversations among the kids. Nothing like a couple of deaths to make it real |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dramatic. The ending was a surprise. You have Ron down. Wow, no messing around here |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could only see Amelia ignoring the situation under compulsion. She would have checked the trial transcripts when he escaped. He may have mentioned potential hiding spots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The inbred stupidity almost makes up for the money and power. But not enough |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dramatic. The ending was a surprise. You have Ron down Well played in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dramatic. The ending was a surprise. You have Ron down to a Tee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story was original, refreshingly different, and well written. Thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very entertaining, enjoyed reading the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't Dumb as a door "sign" a contract as well? He certified the will as a witness, and by violating it he is in violation of his signature on a contract |