This is the most annoying shit I've ever read so far... Leo seems like an idiot who don't capitalize on his meta knowledge. For some reason, he wantonly told his 'suspicions' about Giovanni, but not about Faba? He knew about Lusamine and Faba with his meta knowledge and could have also mentioned it to victoria but why not? Just for this bullshit plot thats why author ignored the fact that Leo could have done the same again? I mean, he already did it once with Giovanni, he could have done the same and attributed it that it was what is within his old world. Like leo: "hey Victoria, i just wanted to say that in my old world, Lusamine was being hypnotized by Faba and when it was found out, it cause a lot of waves since it was showed that faba had been doing this for a long time and even caused trauma to lillie. Just wanted to let you know though, im not sure if its the same case in this world"... Makes sense right? Right?! Facking shit

No fick! Not Magnemite man... There was a jangmo-o and your not giving MC one and opted for a Magnemite?! Wtf?

Bro, you literally turned MC in to a kid. I mean his actions had become that of a child... Though I quite understand since even I still end up doing childish things, the only thing stopping me from acting in to a full blown child is the fact that I am literally an adult in size, it would be embarrassing. Though, I have to admit that if I were to suddenly become a child even if ai retained my adult mind, I'd definitely act like a child, play around, etc... i honestly miss being a child, away from worries of being an adult, just care free doing things I'd be able to do and legally play around without being embarrassed. BUT! I would miss sex more so I'd rather stay as an adult and get to fuxk my girls than turn in to an 'innocent' child, i love pussy more...

I finished the complete binge of this story in about a week and i had to take two days to gather my thoughts.

sad to see this go unfinished like this but i still want to thank you very much for allowing me to witness what has been written untill the end.

Your story had a particular feel to it. It pulled me in and it didn't stop feeling like the hero was on the back foot. very good work with the power-scaling.

character development was nice as well. people and pokemon had meaningful moments to show them grow. i genuinely almost lost tears reading Dianas evolution.

good by and thank you

hisuian typhlosion is better

I'm about to have myself some Faba Beans with a fine Chianti.

This creep is counting down seconds of unbroken jaw privileges.

Ok, so i'm currently in the process of binging through this banger of a fic and i just couldn't stop myself from wanting to leave a review for the end of this chapter.

What a hilarious way for his friend to shout out into the world that he wants to be found.

Amazing idea!

one of the best stories I have the pleasure of reading in this app. i hope one day you'll find the passion to finish this beautiful story. I greatly enjoy reading Leo's story and perspective in the Pokémon world. Thank you for such an emotional ride.

Absolutely amazing fic. This was my first Pokemon fic (without being a crossover). I enjoyed it thoroughly. I’m a casual fan, only having played the games without much experience with the world. But I really enjoyed your worldbuilding and how you portrayed Leo interacting with the Pokemon universe. I also really loved his relationship with his Pokemon and their individual personalities and arcs.

It’s sad to hear that you stopped having fun writing this, but I wanted to let you know that I had a lot of fun reading it! Thank you for including your notes on what would have been- it helped to give closure. I’m still going to follow in case you someday get another spark of inspiration

Damn, yeah. That would happen. You chose to go to Alola, slowed down the story with a bunch ot crap, etc.

Alola is fucking lame.

history good

Maybe that Absol can join his team too?

… why does he complain about being treated like a kid… then go on to act like a 5 year old? What in gods name is going through your head as you write this?

I imagine many people are INCREDIBLY disappointed with this development. Why you had to drag some other git along with the mc i will never know. But what i can say is that this work was interesting until you reintroduced this jack twat into the mix. Not impressed