Reviews for Rival Heirs
BlueArk64 chapter 43 . 4/11
thnx for the update man. and by chance will the lucifuge lucifer story ever get an update?
Kouteikuro chapter 43 . 4/3
I just hope that during their act of vigilantism, because All Might didn't give them permission to act, someone gets hurt or harmed, and All Might comes to their defense, saying that it was their hero instincts that made them act despite the situation. This is while Mina watches what happens, wondering to herself why All Might never said those words on her behalf when she was the one in trouble? Why was she abandoned while her other comrades are praised despite going through the same circumstances? Why are her comrades praised while she is discriminated against, and even her family is attacked just for being her relatives?

This would make her see the injustice of the world, and finally accept to serve Izuku with all her loyalty, just like Himiko, seeing that he was the only one who reached out to her when she was forgotten by others.

It would be interesting to see how Aizawa, Nezu, and the Iida family would react to seeing that Mina is now a criminal, a villain created by their own hands when they decided to abandon her, and seeking revenge against them for abandoning her when she needed help the most. Because I'm sure the Iidas had something to do with the attack on Mina's mother.
Yami Luna Kitsune chapter 43 . 4/3
good chapter

eager for the next one
STrangeDude ST chapter 6 . 4/2
Forgot to say in the previous chapter, when you told us about "Itsuka's quirk merged with OFA, just like quirks of the past users"
It's not the case, really.
You can imagine it like that - OFA (one core), Big Fists - different core.
OFA doesn't absorb quirks, it collects "embers" of those quirks.
Or, to be precise, the core of OFA was in touch with the core of another quirk for so long, that, this other core left a print of itself in the core of OFA (so, like a cloning technique for quirks? More or less).
Like two circles, that push boundaries of eachother, connecting their insides. And, through breaking those boundaries, you could say, blood exchange happened. OFA's energy flowed into your original quirk, constantly pumping its energy into it, and - you, while your original quirk - into OFA.
You could say, that this is the reason for such an awful strain - short life.
OFA just has so much energy, that is flowing into you and your quirk, that your body is breaking down from this "flood".

But, when you pass on OFA - you don't pass on your original quirk.
Otherwise, it wouldn't be logical for past users to fight with AFO, when they don't even have their original quirks. Example - Kudo, second user. He used Gearshift on a bullet/peashooter, even though he passed OFA to Bruce.
conwear267 chapter 43 . 4/1
Thanks for the excellent chapter!
NinjaFang1331 chapter 43 . 4/1
Great work
STrangeDude ST chapter 3 . 3/31
Just like a lot of people on the comments, I have some problems with that fic (though, I will not include those, that are mentioned in the comments of this chapter)-

First - it seems to me, that Momo's great somewhat grandfather is a fool (like, why would he limit his family to the simple level of creation, if it could evolved/got better with next generations. No, "I will just pass it on to my bloodline, without a chance of it growing stronger".)
Second - shouldn't All Might have a huge network, or, something like that? With it, he could have found Izuku's apartment, no? "Oh, damn. It seems to me, that I lost his trail. Well, time to call Tsukauchi/Nezu/Anyone else"
Third - All Might in his civillain form - is not a weak dude. He has experience of about 40 years, is a genius in heroics. He has sharpened reflexes. And, if we include Stain's "conqueror's haki", All Might also has it, logically. Though, it's an old fic, that's why I am using the logical part. But, in the sixth season - he has shown it, directly (but, of course, those guys knew about him being All Might. So, it could have played a big factor). Though, it would have been difficult to fight against a mutant, blade wielder and the pot dude at the same time. But, still possible, as they shouldn't have a good teamwork, or, enough experience.
An Hero Appeared chapter 9 . 3/12
These author notes are way too damn long
An Hero Appeared chapter 1 . 3/9
You really didn’t need to recap 1:1 canon. Just start a paragraph or so from when it diverges. An entire chapter, a first chapter even, is nonsense.
Guest chapter 41 . 2/28
Oooo I know this will be a great arc. That being said, I can't believe he just walked over and introduced himself with his name. Even if it was just a coincidence of name, I seriously doubt they would forget Tomura's name. Assuming they did though, I'm really curious on what Jirou will make of it with her excellent hearing. I can't wait!
TheCuriousGuest chapter 40 . 3/2
Lol, imagine if he'd revealed just who the hero was.
With his replacement knowing All Might was originally Quirkless and his 'niece' being Quirkless herself.

Itsuka just hurt Melissa with her answer, Melissa's smart enough to hear the 'polite no' she gave and would be interesting if Izuku happened to find her during her vulnerable moment.
Neo Infinity chapter 42 . 3/2
Thanks for the great chapter keep it up
Crofty666 chapter 40 . 3/1
I'm incredibly curious on who Ghidorah and Enma would be in this situation, S class villains is obvious considering David mentioned them in the same breath a AfO so I really want to know more about them.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 42 . 3/1
Wonder if the lad will make it out of this with his cover intact.
Yami Luna Kitsune chapter 42 . 3/1
this is a pretty great chapter

eager for the next chapter
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