Reviews for Taiji Principle
stanley.teriaca.7 chapter 7 . 11/2/2022
There are a few nitpicks with the story.

Basically, someone probably told you this before, but Japan has a six day school week. This, if the Sailor Senshi left Friday night, they would be missing one day of school (Saturday, since Japan has a Monday to Saturday school week). It can be ignored for Fruikan High School (because Principal Kuno is such a wack job for anything Hawaiian and Hawaii has the English School Week of Monday to Friday).

I'm sure someone at Juban High School would mention that seven students decided to play hooky on Saturday.

Beyond that and "Negaverse", which is more of an overlook able pet peeve, it is going swimmingly.

I'm looking forward to seeing this story complete.
Armiture chapter 7 . 9/24/2022
If the psychologist doesn't know about Ranma's curse, then the results produced will be inaccurate. You can't get good results from bad data.

What's going on with Tofu Ono is disturbing to say the least.

Nice to see some life return to Soun.

I hope chapter 8 is around the corner, this is interesting.
Armiture chapter 6 . 9/24/2022
I wonder if Genma is trying to get back custody of Ranma.

Also, I think Ranma jinked himself in the last line.
Armiture chapter 5 . 9/24/2022
Well, that last bit was certainly ominous.

You did good in this chapter, though there is no apparent link between Borealis and the events that took place in this chapter.
Armiture chapter 4 . 9/24/2022
Wow, that was a surprise revelation at the end. I enjoyed the chapter and the end made her unease clear.

Also, in Amy's last line of dialog, the question mark and ellipsis need to be swapped to indicate a prompting question.

And you put quotes around the narration of Ranma tugging on her skirt.
unknown chapter 7 . 7/28/2022
I just discovered that the sailor ranko comic is still being made. Just have to go to
Lukkai chapter 7 . 2/10/2022
Tofu? Very ominous.
Greyfox2 chapter 7 . 12/19/2021
Lovely to see the Sailor Sun saga continued, you are doing a fantastic job writing this. It is actually quite riveting to read the ongoing mental pressures of Ranma's...quadruple (?) life has on this psyche, let alone recent events bearing burden. Poor Tofu got possessed though;that's not good! Here's to happily anticipation for the next chapter and a happy holiday to you.
silverhawk88 chapter 7 . 12/18/2021
Sweet! So there is a chance Ranma is going to meet his grandparent! Also I am glad Soun is going to have the chance to teach again and so Tofu is possessed…crap, it looks like whatever is there may be looking for Ranma or Sun. Dangers lurking.

Great chapter as always!
silverhawk88 chapter 3 . 10/7/2021
It was nice to see Nodoka connect with Akane. Great development. That doll must have been Ranma’s at one point is my guess. Also I can see that there could be something starting with Soun and Tomoko. This chapter seemed to have a bunch of plot points that are going to come into play later on in the story. I can’t wait to see what is going to happen!
Lukkai chapter 6 . 9/26/2021
Thanks for the info about the webcomic. I probably wouldn't have noticed otherwise.

But yeah... Ranma definitely has some identity issues to work out.
silverhawk88 chapter 6 . 9/26/2021
Hm, looks like they managed to stabilize the station and Ranma got a new form out of it as well. I also loved your inclusion of who Metalia used to be. That was an cool twist. Too bad Metalia got power hungry and use her strength for good.

Huh I am guessing Ranma couldn’t have become Sun till metalia was defeated because of Metalia being bound to Guardian Sun. It is an interesting theory anyway.

Great chapter as usual!
Lukkai chapter 5 . 4/26/2021
Nothing much to say on this one except for encouraging you to go on. I do want to see where you are going with things.
Bigou chapter 5 . 4/17/2021
Thanks for the new chapter. It's a good one, must have been hard to make.

And good luck for the next one!
silverhawk88 chapter 2 . 4/11/2021
Ranma had a lot to work on this chapter. I like the introduction of Nodoka’s sister and family. I usually don’t notice grammar errors, I tend to focus on the story and it how good it is and not the grammar. This is a great story you have.
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