Reviews for The Omashu Front - Civil War after the Fall of Ba Sing Se
rach12901 chapter 11 . 6/30
I knew Zuko would run into Jet! I’m happy that he is getting more self-confident. Your Zuko is a crafty one. I like how he and Azula’s relationship is more nuanced, it’s not as antagonistic as it was in the show.
rach12901 chapter 10 . 6/29
Such a great chapter. I feel Zuko will run into Jet quite soon. Katara and Sokka on the run, wow. I’m worried for them. Zhao is ruthless.
rach12901 chapter 9 . 6/25
This story deserves more reviews. I like the relationship between Zuko and Azula and Sokka and Katara. I’m wondering if Katara and Sokka on their journey will encounter Aang. I hope so. Also I’m wondering how Zuko will see the light and switch over to Iroh’s side.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/24
This was a great chapter. I love the conversation between Zuko and Azula. And also the mention of Mai. Does this story have couples? If so, I would suggest Zutara. But if you decide against that I will continue to read. I’ve never seen a civil war story where Lu Ten was alive and Zuko was not with Iroh. So I’m interested to see where you take this story.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/21
Interesting chapter about Lu Ten and what normal Fire Nation people think of him and Iroh.
rach12901 chapter 3 . 6/19
A civil war between Iroh/Lu Ten and Ozai/Zuko/Azula. I’m interested to see how this plays out. I know Zuko will switch sides eventually. I’m also interested in how Sokka and Katara factor into all this.
rach12901 chapter 4 . 6/19
This is a really interesting AU. Please continue.
oliviilskov chapter 2 . 6/19
Very well written, I look forward to seeing where you're going with this AU.