The ending might have been a dash underwhelming, but that doesn't detract from how utterly epic the rest of the story is. XD Great work!

Awwwwwwwweee omake #1 was THE CUTEST THING EVERRRR AHHHHH

“Son of Coul” I CAN’T HAHHAHAHAHA

I just now figured out the meaning behind and what padfoot is I'm not going to spoil it for anybody. It shocked me for a second when I really thought about it which then made me feel stupid because I should have already known

I love our grim beat the loving tear out of Loki

This might be good but if the writer is still around, they might fix simple stuff like walking into the bathroom several times in the start. There's so much to read... That kind of stuff just makes you go elsewhere.

I am really enjoying this story. The plot is interesting, the character use is believable and the writing flows well. Thank you for sharing your stories.

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I’m now purely reading this for the omakes, there absolutely hilarious

you really need to use a different word besides 'hostile' to describe the robbers. after the fifth time in a row, it's a bit jarring

The Omakes ruin this and do nothing but pad the word count.

yeah the meeting between harry and furybwould never go down this way its nothing but forced plot trash that would not and could not ever happen.

lmao nothing but slave minded ignorance turned up to 11.

yeah, fury isn't mad eye, and they dont share any real similarities aside from having one eye, and thats slim as mad eye has a magical eye replacement.

slave minded fucking trash only the dumbest sheeple could enjoy