|Reviews for Just One Night|
| D. Page Robin chapter 7 . 3/5
You really are going to put these two through the wringer, aren't' you? I can hardly wait!
D. Page Robin
| D. Page Robin chapter 5 . 3/5
I am like this story very much so far. This is great first fic. I look forward to reading the rest
D. Page Robin
| DylanL chapter 13 . 1/1
Interesting story. It could have done with an epilogue but it was still good. Also interesting that Ron took over Oliver Wood's spot twice.
| TheShiningStar chapter 13 . 11/4/2013
| alix33 chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
"Only too find that she was not there." - "Only to find".
"but he was to blind to see what was right in front of him." - "he was too blind to see".
"After the celebration everyone said there good byes." - "said their goodbyes".
"When it came time to say good by to Harry," - "say goodbye to Harry".
| alix33 chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
Asking that of Harry must have taken such courage, the kind of courage I do not have and have never had and thus online sorting hats never sort me into Gryffindor.
| alix33 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Poor Hermione. Poor Harry too.
| quillbee05 chapter 13 . 5/6/2012
Sweet story! I enjoyed this, please write more fics!
| Amber-Emma chapter 13 . 4/11/2012
WOW! you are a born-to-be-author! congrats! i will make sure to tick the four boxes below this review box! love i ALL! -emma xxxxx
| Auroras Jenkins chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
I like your story very much.
| H Harmon chapter 13 . 7/26/2011
This is a cute story. I liked how it seemed to keep everyone but Ron in character. It was very entertaining, thank you.
| Janet chapter 13 . 7/2/2011
For a first time fanfiction writer, this is really good! Your writing isn't the best, but the energy you spent trying to make this story good really shows through! I haven't seen a story this. . . ALIVE before. You did really well in writing it, congratulations!
| Little Nadeshiko chapter 3 . 12/4/2010
okay i just finished the third chapter and i regret to say i cannot read further... i realise that you wrote this piece of fanfic several years back and have by now maybe acquired more life experience, but this? Wow, this was just... not too good.
I was trying not to laugh at how blindly naive and (for lack of a better word) kitschy this was... And by THIS i mean the so called "passionate love scene" that you tried to desribe here. I usually try never to flame and I sincerely hope that you won't consider this flaming, but please, get some perspective! If life (and love) was really like this, then laws of physics and chemistry would have to majorly shift to make room for all the sappiness.
that said, i thought your summary (the reason i clicked on this story) was very nice and i hope other people enjoyed your writing )
| Nathan21 chapter 4 . 8/5/2010
i noticed in the graduation scene you stated that serious (sorry if i miss-spelled serious) was attending but serious had died in year 5.
| Mister Bigglesworth chapter 13 . 6/4/2010
Story Added to C2: Harry's Lemonade Stand