Reviews for The Fool |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Appreciate your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn’t mind seeing a 3rd chapter wherein Bella and Rose sees each other and Bella just don’t care anymore. But great story! Thanks for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you had the intentions of keeping this a one shot, but the letter from Alice really adds to it as well. I would love to read Rosalie's perspective as well. I would love if you took it farther with Rosalie so we find out what happens after the hunger is satiated. I think that would bring great closure to your story. Awesome story! I cannot wait to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() One more chapter with Rosalie replying to Bella. Please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wouldn’t mind another one shot of Bella and Rosalie seeing each other and Bella walking away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Thanks for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love not always win. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very sad. I liked how you wrote the letter documenting their relationship and the hurt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad, but what about a peek into Rosalie reading the letter ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a beautiful oneshot! It is a different perceptive on the Rosalie x Bella pairing and also offers a different kind of happy ending. In the end Bella became stronger and more independent. If you ever consider to make an another oneshot in this universe, it would be wonderful to read a possible response from Rosalie or a letter from Alice. Anyways, thanks you for your hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so sad but deserving and I could see it happening. |