Hello, Loved all three of theses stories! Well done! I really liked how you chose a bit out of the way characters and gave their perspectives. Nice work :)

Love it!

I LOVE Hera, she's so misunderstood and has SO much potential! Finally I find a story where she isn't a vilain, thanks.

What a brilliant ending!
I kinda want you to make a second gen version of this with like Athena, Artemis, and Aphrodite or something.

Wow. You took the myths and pushed them to a whole other level that shows just how morbid and disgusting the three brothers could be. Hades abducted Persephone, Poseidon did... you know..., and of course Zeus, the worst of them all.

This was amazing! I love the way you wrote her, and also the fact that Hades is a feminist. I like the way you took the whole color aspect of it. (btw I'm in 5th cohort)(also I remember you as the first person to ask me to join a forum and ngl I had no idea what a forum really was back then)

I really love your characterizations! Most of the fanfics I've read usually places those three goddesses as background characters, and their characterizations are usually one directional. Hera as the petty one, Demeter as the one obsessed with cereal, and Hestia as the silent nice one. I love how you added depth to these characters.

That was great!

Nice. I like your writing style.

I love love love love love love loved it!
But I'm kinda sad it's over. I wanna read more. But good job pooh.

Ahh I loved this os much! You described Hestia just perfectly, this was amazing!

Excellent story. Hera and Demeter are by far my favourite deities and you write both beautifully.

That was INCREDIBLE! You are so right that Demeter doesn’t get enough stories! This is amazing! I can’t wait for Hestia’s chapter!

Thank you everyone for your feedback. I am glad that people are enjoying this story. :)

This! My heart broke reading this. Poor Demeter.
Awesome job writing!