Fun fact: Haki is actually invisible, the black is a visual effect to show the viewer when they are using it

You, legit, made me shed a few tears with this chapter. Luffy training to protect so he can have friends and not lose them is memorable. Keep up the good work

AhhhhhhhhhHHHHH SHSHDHHSNE NOOOOOOOO when will you ever continue this masterpiece hope your doing alright now

In my brain after dragon answers luffy take the receiver and goes " yo dead beat dad ". ... Funny reactions included.

One thing to say and don't take this the wrong way...if you have your muse or not. I... sadly do not own a account, so yea just put a note in the story requesting this and you've got yourself a big fat chappy in review form! No need to give credit, just post it an make your readers happy ). ALSO if you post it in the story, chances are Im not gonna be the only one making a reveiw, soooooo il add this
at the end so you know which ones real: 1!2 3#4$

Awesome. Oh oh oh IDEA Do Zoro next! YIPPEE!

APPLAUSE TO THE AUTHOR. YOKU YATTA!

For the record, I am Gen Alpha and F word is not in my verbal vocab, only mental. And that's thanks to my peeps like you. Honestly, I could say I was born in the 80's and I bet people would believe me. 2012!

Can you just write a small chapter I want to read about dragon and luffy having talk monkey D family style

Aww I really like this story

Best one piece story I've ever read

I wish this story could continue. It's not everyday that one gets to read good literature.

I love this story. The canon divergence is sick!
Huuu. Love that the world outside of Fuusha is also moving and growing. And Garp is so understanding in this. Love it! Madman as he is. Hahaha

And Luffy despite having his haki shot he IS still stronger than average man.
Thank you for the story ️
I'll be waiting for you to having inspiration to continue this story!

¡GRACIAS POR ESTA INCREIBLE HISTORIA! Si en algun momento vuelves a actualizar, estare aqui.

Hope you update soon author