Oh my gosh dragon’s going to have a heart attack XD

Good luck dragon and every human before him! Hahahaha!

i love the pacing. it gives me time to read other stories that i need to catch up on. i can wait for the next chapter! and with all three stuff about not being able to update for a few weeks is fine! you take your time. everyone needs a break to get back into reality and take time to fix problems. especially during what's been happening so far. Stay safe out there!

Pls update

I’m excited! I really want to know what Luffy is gonna day and how Dragon is going to respond. What will Sabo and Ace think of what Luffy’s doing? I love this fanfiction and can’t wait for the next update.

Characters are more or less intact, so you're good there. I'm interested in this completely shifted timeline you've concocted. Keep it up and don't be discouraged to continue the way you want it too! Lost too many good stories that way.

Nooo! ¡¿Porque?! Autor-san, te encanta hacer eso, ¿Verdad? Dejarnos con las ganas de ver lo que acontece después. Jajaja, me encantó la historia, espero con ansias la continuación.

I hope you can continue writing this

Fantastic AU journey
Like What-If scenario the author kindly plot. Although I’m really sad for Nami mother. One piece in majority is a bloody anyway.

Wandering how Luffy will start his adventures ; maybe by planning ahead with Dragon . What is interesting is the identity of that woman in Nami village, just guessing, could it be Moodie who accompanied Fullbody to the Baratie and dined with him.

Cannon plot becoming boring and different start will be awesome , where the author is very kind to share this story with innovation.

Now he meet Nami earlier, how about Zoro and Sanj and ... . Maybe the timeline will be shifted in this AU somehow for some events as decided by the author.

But how about Merry and could it be different larger design. I like it in this story that the outcomes is better with shank. Thank you

Maybe :
- savo Koby earlier and maybe at Alivia island
- brilliant for the map Luffy had that mad Buggy one useless. I don’t like Buggy

Sorry, I’m running out of ideas at the moment

Best Regards

Sabo and Ace are in-character and you're doing a good job with Luffy so dont worry. Otherwise a great chapter hope you keep making these

i like your characters so far! like what you did with garp. that was pretty cool :D

I wonder is the first thing he is going to say is Hey Dad

This is a really great story. Good Peggy Sues are rare and most of them are super short, so I'm glad that this one is still going strong!

To answer your question, the characters are all well done. The thing with Garp kicking Jinbe's ass was unexpected but it really is something he would do, so good job thinking that one up. You also did a good job making Luffy seem more mature without making him un-Luffyish which is generally hard to do. Most bad Peggy Sue fics fail at that and suffer for it, but you did it well.

Definitely excited for more!

Wow ,you packed this chapter with goodness ,I was glad it was Garp that picked them up ,but I bet the boys were not so happy about it ,haha . Was not expecting Garp to beat the shit out of Jimbei and almost start a war with Whitebeard ,that part was sick ,it did not bother me because it was not strawhat Jimbei ,I felt it was Garp’s obligation to do so for what Jimbei indirectly did ,just as Whitebeard was obligated to go to fishmen island as a result ,really liked all that Twist . I knew Sabo had to leave at some point to continue with his path to and with the revolutionary army ,let’s see what happens with Luffy and Dragon ,all in all another damn good chapter . Ps ,Luffy should modify and wear that seastone bracelet ,it will surely help him.

they're about 80% or more in character id , thanks for the chap and i hope you update soon.

wait they didn't kill Arlong? just shoot him in the head or chop his head off? i mean it sounds they're gonna kill him but with drugs but why? sounds too much effort. just chop him into pieces or whatever and then burn him.