Good story so far. BTW even if the story was incoherent the fact you are one of a few people to make lengthy hollow knight fits bumps you up on my favorites.

Will this story continue?

I think hornet was supposed to say "His Father, my mother"

The economy is going to be in shambles.

Hmm.

While there are certainly better fanfiction writers out there, there are innumerable more that are far worse. You are doing quite well. I would consider you on the higher end of writers I’ve encountered. Keep up the good work.

Good stuff.

I found this quite enjoyable.

Okay this went from amazing to stupid. You brought all the heros to the nest, and now bugs.. real bugs are showing up. Why did you ruin this by bringing in even more from another world?!

Ok so it was Gaster. Still unexpected.

Did... Did I completely misread that, or did mother fucking Sans the Skeleton just drop in for a chat?

Me encanta la historia y fue buena idea que escojieras a hollow knight en vez de ghost muchos realmente no se dan cuenta de lo dificil que seria realmente escribir un personaje que carece de pensamiento y voluntad y encima mudo hollow knight carece de voz pero tiene mente para pensar y una voluntad que un escritor puede ponerle la personalidad que quiera pues se sabe tan poco de el como persona que es muy maleable

I got as far as chapter 24, before the entire story turned into a crack-fic. What the actual hell happened with this transition? Like, just halfway through 24 the story either changed into a long-ass Omake, or a crack-fic, with ch.25 coming off as an entire Omake story itself.

automatic spinning discus

Was that SNARK?