Ahhh i’m sorry. I’m a Filipino and the name you used for the Philippine airport is a very infamous name (historically speaking). I don’t know if you’re still reading reviews and if this will make a difference. But i’m just letting you know that I love reading your stories and this part right here hust threw me off a little bit.

when I think of them waiting till the wedding night to have sex, I laugh a little thinking, what if he had a micro penis?

This is one of my favourite books ever. Literally amazing 10/10 story here.

I can't believe I got to read this for free.

listen...if you ever continue this story...I will be so happy! I loved it! Nellie was a 10/10 great addition and I loved the story!

I live near Cardiff. what are they going to hunt? chavs?

The implosion of the Volturi would be interesting to read, I hope you decide to do a sequel!

Oh shit I’ve read your other stories and love them too! Great work!

Just fuck her senseless, take a bite and a couple long pulls ;)

Whew, what a ride, I laughed, I cried. I think my heart actually broke , thank you.

Omg I'm bawling like a baby.

I love the premise and look forward to reading the story. The only alteration I'm not crazy about is the loophole in the treaty the Cullens have with the Quileute tribe that allows the Cullens to turn a willing human into a vampire because I can't see them ever agreeing to that. I also don't think they would ever consider it likely that a human would even want to become a vampire nor would the Cullens think to set up a contingency plan in case they want to ever turn someone since Carlisle hadn't actually done that in 50 years despite meeting plenty of people he could have saved by turning. The fact that the original treaty specified no Cullens can bite a human already presents a loophole for them to turn Bella by injecting the venom via a syringe, which is pretty clever. Anyways, it's not super relevant and I don't know yet how the story will unfold, so I'm keeping an open mind. Your story comes highly recommended, so I have no doubt it will be fantastic no matter what!

Yet another incredible story! You kept me on the edge of my seat, and I truly didn't expect any of the twists and turns you included! I love the way you wrote Edward and I love seeing things from his perspective! I also LOVE Nellie and love the relationship she builds with Edward and Bella! The prologue was wonderful and I love finding out what everyone is up to. If you choose to continue this story I will gladly read it! Looking forward to any future work! :)

Why did the only person who had a respectable plan Turn out to be “the kid” ? I know why... Cullens are too consumed with their charade of a happy human life. They wanted to get back to thier game of pretend as soon as possible and if that required a willing sacrifice then so be it.

Skipped ahead. Didn’t want to read about all the “happiness” they were having after behaving so ridiculously. They had the advantage and just gave it up then had to give up Nellie because they couldn’t stomach dealing with corruption when faced with it. They just wanted to go back to thier little lives buried head deep in the sand. Cowards. No respect for any of these characters. So hopefully this chapter fixes that.

They would not have been good parents. They just gave Nellie up like that... sooo nope. Smh.