|Reviews for rip and tear until you can save rewrite|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
When it comes to stories, there’s multiple sections split into subsections. The Good, Mediocre, and Bad. And then there’s this. What? I don’t know what to say. You have made a story that is so bad, that a 5 year old could do better. Seriously, the thing about using established characters in a story, is you have to make them either like how they were originally , or have an explanation for the personality change. A teenager is not going to try and crush the skull of a demon, they’re gonna try to escape or hide from it. You need to either willingly put effort and time into this, or just hand this idea/ project to someone else.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
use more commas, but a part from that great story beginning!
| Skeletalrepublic chapter 1 . 6/27
I honestly hate stories where the main protagonist of the series changes drastically from their original personality.
All Evil Deku fics just show very well how shitty such concept is. Very uncharacteristic and so far from the original character they could be considered an OC.
This fic is no exception to any of the criticism. Lots of uncharacteristic actions, awful personality progression, chapters shorter than a single bible page. This fic has no planning at all. No explanation, no build up, you just made an OC disguised as Deku and turned him into the Doom Slayer.