That was so cool! I love when he speaks Parsletongue with a snake. I'm hoping that he'll become an Animagus too.

Does Harry get to keep the egg? Does he get to raise it? I hope so! I think that would be SO cool!

good story i guess so far. not a fan of slash tho!

Sahar and Sirius wouldn't be second cousins. Bellatrix is Sirius's FIRST cousin and that means Sahar would be Sirius's first cousin once removed, not second cousin.

OK I have joine dyour yahoo group so YAY on that note but I have a question was this story ever really finished because I went over to what you call the 2nd part and it no make sense! help please gimme some answers My yahoo name is the same one as on here just with underscores so you can reach me there. thanx much

Hello! I've just discoverd your story and I really like it :)

I guess this is all I can say because you finished it ages ago! But I really like your Draco and I hope he won't be a Death Eater

This story is marked as complete but it's obviously not finished. Is there a sequel or was it mis-marked? It is very good by the way.

OMG..!

ok as you oh soo requested i'll start my ranting..

first up..

what will happen to Harry now..? will he be returning..? guess not...

there is still a lot of things that's going to unfold..

HOW I WANT TO SEE THAT... *giggles*

what the hell happened to the incantation..?

hm.. the crafty workings of Dumbledore..?

is he that manipulative here..?

he doesn't really want harry to return right..?

guess i need to wait for till i read the second one

im sure sev will find a way for harry to be swayed to receive the mark.. *winks*

but it will be exciting to see harry oppose LV openly..

but im more concern 'bout that since even Dumbledore seem to be working in shadows too..

just like what you said..

but it will be hugely entertaning nonetheless for Harry to become a Death Eater...

to be close to Sahar.. hopefully i'll get some Sahar and Harry friendship..

i really want them to be somehow friends...

but then if he's not a Death Eater.. oh well...

BUT i still want Sahar... i just pity her for her blind affection towards Sirius..

i mean.. hopefully Siri will see the light...

and NOW on to much more important matter *smirks*

DRACO..! RUN FASTER YOU PRAT..!

that was just too heart warming you know...T_T.. damn Lucius.. his VERY in character btw..

AH... 'MIONE..! NO..! please.. dont do anything drastic..

try to be your usual logical self pls.. just dont do anything drastic..

Draco ubdoubtedly LOVE you.. and He will protect you no matter what... of course hopefully in the second one it will turned out right..

wait.. Can't wait to know what will happen once LV knows about "Harry"..!

surely hell will broke loose.. anyway the distant relative thing is very intriguing.. will that hold on..? will Lily's blood be somewhat Slytherinnish... but i can understand if you dont dwell on that idea..its clinche...

PLEASE YOUR PUTTING me in Cruciatus curse.. actually i am the one putting it to myself since i can not help but review before i go on to the next one.. why can't i just go on to the second one and save myself from being a mumbling fool...! the mystery of life

but oh well i just wanted to give you this review since i read this non-stop..

off me go..! gonna read thee second one.. weie..!

i dont' think you've been forshadowing sahar/sirius as well as you thought. if anything it came out like she might be siri's daughter or goddaughter or that she'd go to the light because of his influence. but as a lover? please. she's younger than even harry and far less mature. it seems a bit ludicrous. i dont' like her character much, that's true. but it simply doesn't seem compatible with sirius's. always seemed like harry should be jealous of her taking siri's attention in such a big way.

i hope you won't make it a big part of the story at all, it kind of sucks.

harry was a bit harsh in this; his thoughts anyway. first he's upset draco downplayed his abilities, but then draco says that he's really good and he accuses him of being arrogant? geez, better than false modesty, and a million times better than self-righteousness. at least arrogance can be attractive in a sense. just confidence, really, especially when you can back it up. Harry seems a bit blase about not going back to his dimension just yet.

hermione is rather annoying, i'm afraid. though perhaps in character. she needs to grow up a bit and stop nagging people.

Aw! Poor 'Mione and Dray! I hope Harry/Bast can help them!

Good Story! I am definately excited for the sequel.

Tee hee. xD This chapter made me laugh out loud, for real. About the part where Snape was questioning Harry... yes, that part.

Hilarious material.

Cool and I enjoyed this. Thanks for writing.