Reviews for Harry Potter and the Mirror Of Paradox |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting beginning. More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting beginning. More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ethan would be neat. Somewhat mature, but still fitting for him. o.O but Sebastian? Make him go my his middle name unless you get a better idea for a nick name. the story is rather neat so far. When I read the title it and this first chapter reminded me of Midnight Blue's "Mirror of Maybe". Seeing as you a HP/SS fan too, I am assuming that is where you got your idea. But this is orginal, and I like you take on a mirror situation. You've got my thumbs up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HP/SS definitely! And come on write more! This is so twisted I love it! So Fudge is working for Voldie? Is Harry going to fight against Voldemort in the AU? What is going to happen with the connection? Is he connected to that Voldie as well despite the fact his other self died? Is the magic of what happened to him enough to cross dimensions? Would Voldemort have possibly SENSED him if it was? O this has so many possibilities as a story I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whahoo! This fic is good! I'm really curious to read the next chapter! Exploring the alternate universe would be great! and I love the name Sebastian! I hope the first meeting with sev will come soon! |
![]() ![]() this is an awesome beginning to a story! you must update and soon! i wanna see what happened to everyone that had survived in Harry's "real" world! and you could call him Bastien or Ethan, whichever works, it's your story. good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this, it is a different start...you could call him 'Bastian... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Yih, I am finally here to read your lastest story. :) It is really good so far. You are so imaginative, like always... . Personnaly, I would like you to developp the other dimension. It would bereally intresting and I am sure your wild imaginationwon't decieve us. Like I told you already on our msn convo, I prefer Sebastian! . So french :) |
![]() ![]() u could call him Than(e) like how you pronounce the last part of Ethan, but like vain with a "t" instead of a "v" |
![]() ![]() ![]() maybe you: *can let him be friends with Draco? *Be in Slytherin? *have Voldemort decide to attack Hogwarts? *Start a better resistance? *Have the malfoys be a light family? *Have Hermione be a pure-blood? Just some ideas. This is your fic and I hope you update soon! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting so far, love to see more. How about Bastian as a nick name, or Bast? Keep it alive. |
![]() ![]() Hey this is an intersesting story that you have started. I'm curious as to how you are going to develop the plot more but from what ive read you are on the right start so can't wait for you to post more! Good luck writing this fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea of alternating chapters... but I do really wanna know what the AD is like *nodnod* And call Harry Ethan - I like that much better then Seb or Sebastian. I love this and I love A Slytherin Love *grins* I want more of your awsome writing-ness! (and more HP/SS!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nah, i think you should just get to the point! :) but i like this! it's.. interesting.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, i like this! all of the parallel stories often become quite good and are imaginative! :D I like the Sebastian name: mostly because it's my boyfriends. lol. O.o Anyhoo, Biggerstaff as his last name, eh? Heh, Sean is just too hot for words. :P Update soon. This is a great beginning. |