Reviews for Jumper went to the wrong jump!
Guest-Questioner chapter 5 . 7/11
Well if THIS doesn't scream mary-sue, i don't know what does!


Will these "power's" at the VERY LEAST, be "awakened" ONLY during, critical, story moving, moment's?

It DOES in fact, get boring when a character can just about, brutalize their opponent so very easily
and come out completely unscathed.

Extra service advice:

The story, depicts Ophis was, like Great Red, a dragon, HOWEVER,

how, could an organic life-form, come into existence in a realm, of literal nothingness?

They can't, so-to-speak.

in another story, ophis is depicted as a brand new form of life energy,
forged from the thought's, emotion's, all thing's alive, in the universe, when Great red,
first entered into, that emptiness, the energy of life, also poured in, and eventually,
it coalesced, and gained an individual consciousness (Ophis)


Ahem, will this O.C, be just as if not more so, powerful than Great Red himself?

I mean like, Trihexa powerful, outright or not, at the end of the day, that is to say?

I have an "desire" to follow this story, but not because i want,
just another overpowered character, but because, i want to see, how the original canon story-line,
can be flipped on it's imaginary head, with something that could "break" the flow of thing's!

End Review.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11
So when will MC meet her Zanpakuto spirit
blbla chapter 3 . 7/11
This is a fun story
Peroroncino chapter 3 . 7/7
Can't wait for your next update Andi hope the MC won't join Rias Peerage cuz that would ruin the Plot of The story she could just go solo and maybeake the 3 factions nuts
Peroroncino chapter 3 . 7/6
More Plsssssss
Guest-Questioner chapter 3 . 7/5
So the question is, That this female O.C... Is a mary-sue in the making?

My reasoning:

Well, having overwhelming power to take on a creature,
with power enough to destroy whole island's, with the same level of power.

Now, becoming so relied upon by the main cast, that the story cannot, move forward,
in ANY way, without her being at center of it all.

Next, having herself, be so "perfect" that story character's could never go beyond a certain point,
the other character's eventually, becoming one-dimensional, in favor of this original character.

End reasoning, End review.
123ABIR123 chapter 2 . 6/28
Please update more and make the mc fuck up the canon story
123ABIR123 chapter 2 . 6/28
Pls update more and make the mc fuck up the canon story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
The third jumpchain fic I see