Reviews for Second Chances
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 21 . 10/26/2022
this story is so good! i really hope there's another update soon!
Damine chapter 21 . 2/21/2022
I liked the fic. Opal is my favourite character, and I'm thankful to you for bringing her back to life in this way. Nopal is incredibly nice! Waiting for the continuation :) With love from Russia.
AKissAndAGunshot chapter 21 . 8/12/2021
I love this so much? Subscribed & I'll remain ever hopeful for a future update
Sean P chapter 21 . 3/2/2021
This fanfiction is amazing. It looks like you haven't added to it since December though (I think, I'm not completely sure how to interpret the Updated thing at the top). I hope you continue it because I already binged it all in one night and I'm looking forward to see where it goes.
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 20 . 2/5/2021
omg that was a really good fight scene!
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 19 . 2/3/2021
Holly is so cute too lol; love her personality in this fic! You've written her so well, so close to the actual books! Love that Nopal is stronger than Arty and can actually pick up Holly easier than Artemis can, but also kinda disturbed by it lol.

also, don't think it's a good idea for Artemis to hide Nopal from Foaly. it gives me a bad feeling lol.

Nopal is soooo cute omg. Her face just begging for more headpats and affection from Arty 3 So precious!

i love Foaly's paranoia and how he designs his parts so confusing that he doesn't remember what they do lol.

it's so creepy how good Nopal is at avoiding Artemis's security cams and staying out of view without even realizing how suspicious and scary this makes her look.

i definitely need to re-read the The Last Guardian lol, I can't remember anything about the ARClight. Love how clever Nopal is, but her irritation/hatred at Foaly is disturbing. It's so cute seeing Nopal lick things to figure them out lol! I'm really interested in Nopal's reactions and worry to the Opal memories she's recalling and the fact that she's able to deduce so quickly that something is off about her and that she might be a clone! Poor thing though, going through this alone! i wish she would trust Artemis and Holly and just tell them what's she's remembering! I'm worried that her keeping this a secret is gonna end up corrupting her, or might make Artemis and Holly suspicious enough towards Nopal, that they stop trusting her, thus leading her to become as evil as Opal was! Thinking about this kinda reminds me of Clark and Lex from Smallville (idk if you know that tv showClark not trusting his friend Lex with his secret despite Lex being a good guy at the time and judging him based on his family's bad deeds is basically what pushes Lex to become evil. (Hope that isn't a spoiler for anyone sonce the show's been over for more than a decade, but that's what Nopal's situation is kinda reminding me of!) I hope that she is able to fight back against any of Opal's evil thoughts/memories/feelings and stay loyal to Artemis and Holly!

I'm so impressed by how brilliant Nopal is, tho I guess just cuz she's innocent like a baby doesn't mean she's not also a genius that can be very dangerous! so this is a good reminder to Artemis hopefully not to underestimate Nopal. Also, I said this already, but love the way you've written Artemis and Holly! Artemis is still cautious and wary, but his character development throughout the books, becoming a good person, makes him unable to treat Nopal coldly and he's so sweet and nice to her. All of their feelings and reactions read very in-character to me, and i love that about your fic! And both Holly and Artemis are just so funny, I feel like this could've been written by Eoin Colfer himself! Wish that talented writers like you could have worked on the Artemis Fowl movie instead of what we actually got lol!
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 18 . 2/3/2021
All of the little Artemis and Holly interactions are so cute! Holly looking at Artemis's "noodle-thin arms" 3 "I know what I know, Fowl." Love this lol!

Also, I do think it's kinda really scary that Opal is so strong and brilliant and has full access to the manor and to move around freely, and literally the only thing stopping her from world-domination right now is knowing that Artemis and Holly would disapprove lol. i still think Nopal is adorable tho, but I'm concerned about her remembering stuff and possibly being influenced to become evil from those memories.

it's so cute that Artemis and Holly enjoy feeding baby Nopal 3 Definitely feels like they're parenting her lol
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 17 . 2/3/2021
tbh i just get a bad feeling from Nopal being free to walk around the manor alone or being allowed to fly. as cute aa she is, i jusr also am a little creeped out/worried by her. what if something triggers her into becoming more like Opal?
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 16 . 2/3/2021
Nopal is so cute and innocent, but some of the things she says just come off as so sinister lol; I can't even blame Artemis for being worried lol.

Nopal licking the old radio is just so precious lol! I love her lines! "Good ham" omg so cutee! Also, Nopal holding Arty's hand trying to play his "rhythm games" and him glaring is also such an adorable image!

Nopal wanting to take some stars is adorable! ughhh how do you write her to be so cute but not too over-the-top?! Love the way you write her and Artemis's reactions to her!
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 15 . 2/3/2021
this comment belongs to my review for Chapter 14, but it wouldn't let me submit another review for it lol: i like seeing how Artemis has changed so much that discussing killing Nopal disturbs him so much at this point. the role-reversal between him and Holly is so interesting but makes so much sense after everything Opal had done to Holly and just overall. and it's just so cute how well he and Holly just know what the other is thinking. Great chapter!

These are my comments for chapter 15:
lol I'm just picturing Butler's face seeing Nopal without a straightjacket or any restraints, being petted by Holly and Artemis! and I love Nopal's reactions! Soooo cute! "Is Holly going to kill me and steal my head?" ughhh why is she so cute lol. Also LOL at Holly only having 4 hours of first aid training that she probably wasn't completely awake for.

Strong Nopal is a little bit creepy tbh; I'd be concerned too if i were Artemis, Holly, and Butler. She's still cute tho. Too cute lol! Love chapter 15 too! 3
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 14 . 2/2/2021
Holly and Artemis's back-and-forth banter is just so cute, i love it!
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 14 . 2/2/2021
nvm, i misread the last part of the previous chapter lol. i thought maybe Artemis just left Nopal alone in the room with the truffles, and it'd lead to a thing where Nopal tried to reach for the truffles and Artemis would think she was escaping/faking somehow lol, but that makes no sense haha, especially since Nopal can still barely move.
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 13 . 2/2/2021
aww this is so sweet! Artemis sees himself in Nopal a little bit! which makes sense as they're both geniuses too of course lol. i think it's so cute that Nopal is bringing out parental, nurturing vibes from Artemis and Holly! 3 Also, I'm guessing that Nopal at some point is gonna find the strength/energy just barely to reach for those truffles lol.
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 12 . 2/2/2021
tho, i'm still a little confused tbh on what that spirit fairy god dude at the beginning did exactly to Opal/Nopal? maybe i need to re-read the beginning. did he wipe Opal's memory and place her mind/spirit into Nopal? How does it work exactly that Nopal doesn't recall being Opal or have any of her memories? i feel like maybe i just read too fast and missed an explanation you already wrote tho. still love this story either way! 3 Nopal is adorbs!
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 12 . 2/2/2021
i love how Nopal is so cute and innocent but still also a genius. great chapter! 3
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