Really enjoying this so far. Interrupting the read mid chapter to say that Taylor’s blow up with Kayden at the start here is great. Very poignant. Good dialogue. Shows how someone can get sucked into bad beliefs just because they need someone and feel alone.

Again, digging this. And generally a very fresh and cool concept.

I didn’t check the last update date but I hope you continue this thing. Or if it is abandonedhey you made something great that has entertained a lot of people. You should feel good/proud about that. Seriously.

Very cool idea. Following this one for sure!

Nice story, I really like the redemption your putting into it. Rebranding is nice. Teenage rebellion is good. Accidentally healing a bigot and not getting into trouble is amazing. Any way to save Tattletale and the Undersiders in your story? Rebrand 'Bitch/Hellhound' into Cerberus and make her guard the local un-powered jail?

I'm liking this story. IRL, Taylor would be messed up and you are capturing that brilliantly. I'm not one for truely angsty stories, simply because most authors go overboard (likely because they didn't do their homework). But you have a nice balance between all the states of mind that are at play here while sprinkling in the needed humor and feels to balance everything out.

As for Rune/Aerial, I read a story by ShaneT, where Rune's power was coupled with a stage 'flying' harness. Unless she is interested in getting lessons from Dauntless, perhaps that would be a better option?

Love love love

Everything is not gonna be fine I see.

I love the story, seriously. It's great. I've had a lot of fun reading through it. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Whew, I was not expecting Danny to survive. This really ended up going way better than it could have. And Taylor finally busted out "mom"! I'm proud of everyone here. Get well soon Danny.

Jesus. I saw it coming when Danny had Taylor go home first, but Jesus. Guess something always has to go wrong just when things are going right. My heart's popping again.

Oh Taylor you poor baby girl. My heart just about burst.

You've caught Taylor's mental troubles really well. I can definitely empathize with her, as I've gone through very similar troubles. I think you're doing a good job there.

I've only read up to here but I wanted to drop a review to say how much I've enjoyed the story so far. You've managed to achieve a delicious kind of grey morality in the story that I really admire. I both like and dislike Kayden just as intended. It's wild how you've truly managed to combine her good and bad sides like this - it's not something just anyone can pull off.

There is also so much emotion in the story. I really feel for Taylor and her circumstances quite a bit. You've struck the delicate balance of bad circumstances that don't go too far into dark and edgy with enough good things happening. It really makes the emotional scenes have impact.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Suppressing problems in the last chapter.

Suppressing problems in this chapter.

There's no way this could have negative consequences, I'm sure.

Well, good sparring/bonding session, but I'm getting worried about Taylor. She's not in a good place mentally, and while Aerial is helping a lot, she can't fix everything.

Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.

I can't stress how much better that last bit was than any variant of 'I hope I didn't jinx myself there'. Very nice.
Also, loved the fights and the banter! In regards to Aerial, I feel like someone ought to point harnesses out to her. Seems like she'd have more control over her movement, not put as much stress on her ligaments etc, and possibly have more room to control other stuff. Downside being no additional kinetic force for any kicks I guess, but accelerating your foot or hand telekinetically seems like it'd harm yourself pretty regularly anyway. I feel like there's a learning curve incoming for her. Unless Dragon just tells her that a harness would work better, just working off of body mechanics.

wow

Interesting power, love the TaylorRune fluff and MomPurity. Can't wait for more :D