Reviews for Hardlight
Gizmo Gear chapter 23 . 1/21
I eagerly await future chapters! This story is good!
Gizmo Gear chapter 20 . 1/21
Heh. Honestly, spilling the beans on that little secret would do wonders for a lot of people.
Gizmo Gear chapter 19 . 1/21
Damn, you really know how to write an anxiety attack...
Are you okay?
Gizmo Gear chapter 17 . 1/21
Ok, Max might survive. In one piece is even less of a chance.
Gizmo Gear chapter 16 . 1/21
Max Anders has officially signed his own death warrant.
Gizmo Gear chapter 11 . 1/20
Yeah, for all everyone in the world likes to spout about the black and white, eveil and good, there's almost no such thing. It's just shades of grey...
Gizmo Gear chapter 4 . 1/20
Whew. Four chapters of chaos thus far. Very interesting alt-power as well.

It's gonna be one interesting ride.
mst3ktoo chapter 6 . 1/20
That smelled like a Simurgh plot
mst3ktoo chapter 5 . 1/20
No, seriously, what the fuck, MM?
mst3ktoo chapter 4 . 1/20
What the fuck, MM?
mst3ktoo chapter 2 . 1/20
A ward? Sure. A hero? Only by court order. Guess she can't know that last..
Sebine chapter 1 . 12/3/2022
I would love to see this continue
Brightstone Keep chapter 14 . 11/17/2022
Empathize, Kaiser... Empathize. Somewhere, Taylor's inner grammarian is screeching.
xBud chapter 16 . 8/26/2022
Boo. Just killed him off after he making him clinically depressed.
najex chapter 23 . 8/13/2022
This story was a delight, and it didn't go nearly as far into 'E88 might not be all bad' as The Slippery Slope did. That story went too far, imo. This didn't really.

One thing I'll comment on is that this version of Taylor feels really, really young. When it described Taylor hugging Purity and how Taylor was taller than Purity, it felt weird, just because of how young she feels in this story. I pictured something along the lines of a twelve year old child when reading this, not a fifteen/sixteen year old teenager. Definitely Vista sized.

Taylor's healing ability here feels like it should have been even more emphasized. They made it a big deal, but it should have been an even bigger deal, I feel. In lore, there aren't really any 'healing' shards. Healing, if its there, is always a byproduct of something else. All the shards are geared towards violence and destruction, not healing.

But yea, great ride. :)
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