Reviews for A Tale of A Jade: The Sons Journey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Come back wit this story bro, i beg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story. |
![]() ![]() update the story please |
![]() ![]() ![]() you gonna do a save the light parody cause I wanna see marcus go up against hessonite |
![]() ![]() please update. You haven't in nearly a year |
![]() ![]() Pretty good, hope to see more Marcus X Lapis moments. The writing is very articulate and well put together. |
![]() ![]() update this please |
![]() ![]() Having reached this point in the story, I can only say that it is the best I have read in terms of Steven Universe fanfics. Although I'm not completely convinced by seeing firearms in a series like this, Marcus seemed like an interesting character with great development and his relationship with the rest of the characters makes him feel like part of the series. Without a doubt, his relationship with Lapis is what I liked the most, it is so well developed that they have become my favorite couple in the series, there is no scene with the two of them together that is not cute. I am very interested in how you will continue the story and how you will develop the film and future when they come in due time. Lots of encouragement and a big hug. PS: I recently finished watching kipo and the age of wonderbeasts, a Netflix animated series with an amazing story and background. If you haven't seen it believe me you'll love it and seeing how well you write your fanfics, I'm sure you'd do a great job with this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Looking forward to your update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, all caught up! Holy shit that took me a while. |
![]() ![]() thank you for adding a marcus x lapis moment in this chapter. Hope those two get on their first date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is another human enemy that the Crystal Gems will have to contend with that they didn't in canon: the United States government. Particularly, the CIA and perhaps the military. |
![]() ![]() I have deviantart account is it okay if I draw Marcus. My deviantart account is NJred2000. |
![]() ![]() OMG! Your back thank goodness of all the hybrid gem OC fanfic out their yours is the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay first off, I'm glad that everything is settling down for you. It's been a rough couple of months. Also the new information about Jade is interesting, new generation of Frontline soldiers, very interesting. Also I love the exasperation Marcus has with the Rubies, he just radiated "I just can't" vibes. An excellent chapter and pacing of it as well. I can't wait to see more. |