Will you be writing more fics?
I hope so. You are a talented writer.

Excellent ending. never would have seen that ending. The nanny was a great surprise as well. I enjoyed this story very much, thank you.

Wow, smart of her, Edward would never have believed her.

Oh my goodness! Whoa. Great twist.

I don't know anymore. still don't trust Ben. I'm guessing I'm going to be surprised.

Ben is freaking me out, not to happy with the detective either, eek.

I love how you wrote this chapter.

Yes, his POV was so much darker than I expected.
Getting a little heated between our two.

A very nice first date. Of course Emmett is loud and fun. Great chapter.

Anything from mybrowneyes.
What a great job. Scary when you find what she did.
Yes, that's what Polaroids are for.

Oh my, this sounds interesting.

I just… wow! Crazy story (but good)

Wow!

So Bella tortures Carlisle with the perfume and a recording of a typewriter keys clacking? WTF?

Why is Bella doing this! There aren't going to be any footprints in the snow leaving the house. What is she thinking?