|Reviews for Snake Venom|
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/6
"Je ne t'ai jamais oubliée. [I never forgot you.]"
I don’t think there is an agreement at the end of the avoir passé composé.
It should be:
"Je ne t'ai jamais oublié. [I never forgot you.]"
| Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 5 . 10/11
Giving my two cents on your questions (and years of studying human psychology)
Bella and Siri's relationship is quite intriguing. Even in the canon books there was a certain hessitance to kill eachother or use lethal spells, if my memory serves me right, but they seemed VERY cheerfully happy to fight eachother. Sirous died by a compleat accident, and I suspect Bella didn't want him dead.
This does raise the question of their past, and wheither they were close or not, which is an unknown factor. I also was not aware their parents were still alive at this time... I do know his mother and father is dead by the time Harry reaches age 14, but I don't know when exactly they do die.
So... All in all, it's plasible.
The Harry/Aiden relationship WOULD have been plasible IF Voldemort WASN'T Sociopathic. But we all know he IS. (Wheither he is a sociopath or a psychopath may define the entier outcome, and we cannot be 100% sure which one he is.)
I would say that even if he is a Sociopath (which, unlike a psychopath, IS capable of love...rare tho it may be) he would STILL be selfish in his love. And would raise his son with a thought to how he may later be of use to him.
The only way your version is possible is if Harry had seduced him by his innocence... which DO remain a possibillity, as unlikely as it may be when you consider how he started out a baby. And a baby WOULD irritate him. Remember his anger-managment issue. He'd likely foister his care onto someone else until he was at least 4. Maybe drop by now and then with the intention of manipulate an emotional bond.
That being said... While unlikely, under certain circumstances, your story is not impossible.
On top of that, your story is actually quote good, and decently well written. So it has more good things than bad.
Just keep in mind that a sociopath do not posess the same feelings as a normal human being. Think of him more like a Sith... like Darth Bane, he's a very good role model to base Tom's thought pattern on... and you'll do fine.
Keep writing and improving. I am curious to see where this leads.
| mumphie chapter 13 . 9/10
Another story that begs you to return!
| elizabeth chapter 5 . 12/22/2018
i always loved evil sirius fics or evil harry fics and this is both
| hagenbucher1970 chapter 5 . 9/14/2018
| Sndwitch chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
I hope you continue this.
| raishaazmi chapter 6 . 3/20/2018
are you going to finish this ? hope you do!
| Lor-tan chapter 13 . 8/28/2017
This is marvelous, and I know it's been a few years but I really wish you'd update. Pretty please, with a dementers kiss on top if you don't? Just kidding. A kiss would be too easy. I'm thinking more along the lines of imperiusing you into it. Have a nice day, meow!
| WTF chapter 13 . 8/24/2017
WHY DID IT END IN THE MIDDLE OF A SENTENCE?!
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/21/2017
A writing style not many have. The weird seem to come alife. Not only did you manage to create a approach to Harry potter but your ideas stuck out in a crowd of fandoms. I hope you consider carry on writing because I would hate to see such talent go to waste.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/21/2017
I really love this story. It's been nearly 10 years so the chances are close to non-existent that you will every continue. But if you every read this review please take what I will say to heart: You have a writing style not
| TMarvoloRiddle1944 chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
If your still around. You should totally update this.
| kagome higurashi chapter 13 . 10/8/2016
please write some more. it's good.
| PercyJacksonDiAngelo chapter 3 . 3/16/2016
please tell me that you will not make this a voldemort/bellatrix story.
| rytan451 chapter 13 . 3/5/2016
Will this be updated? Nine years is a long time. I do hope that is will be updated.