Reading to this point the story is very slow because of how many times information was repeated mainly introducing the same character with their full description or overly decribing a location. If these types of excess were removed you’d probably have 3 less chapters. Ive gotten to the point were you start writing to much setting detail i just skim over it, i know i might miss something small but i couldnt read this story otherwise at this point in the story.

Very good! My conclusion after reading this story is, above all, that it is clear the evolution of the author's writing!
If I were to summarize it, it would be like this:
It started very well, extremely interesting; Oh, it got a bit monotonous around chapter 9, more or less; Then it got to chapter 15, and it was horrible, chapters 15, 16, 17, they were the worst, I almost gave up at that point; But then, as you go through them, the story gets good again and only gets better, but unfortunately the author hasn't updated it in a while...
In short, it's very good, but I would skip chapters 15, 16, 17, as they are really discouraging, because after them the story only gets better, and it's worth reading, even though it's apparently dead...
Congratulations to the author!
:)

Boring... Creativity ended here...

I honestly don't see why he would probably be a Gryffindor...?
Like, from what I've read so far, he has demonstrated few characteristics that would define him as a Gryffindor, in fact, he has demonstrated many Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff characteristics, which to me makes placing him in Gryffindor a bit forced, it seems a bit like , distort the character and plot to fit into the Harry Potter canon...
Honestly, I found a lot of things about this chapter, too much the same, without anything innovative, almost like rereading the books, I can already imagine, Ron will arrive, Harry will be friends with him, Ron will be the jealous asshole from the books, Harry will forgive and accept, Hermione will appear, also make friends, and it will basically be a reinterpretation, to me, it seems a little lackluster, even lazy...
But other than that, I'm loving the story, I really need more fanfics of the same style, I love fanfics that make Harry other people's son and give him a relatively more pleasant childhood, seriously, am I the only one who's tired of excessive anguish? That's why I don't read much on AO3, haha...

harry seems needlessly cruel to Hermione

I love to see the rest of this story I am hooked like a fish. I can't wait to see if harry becomes part of the advenders team later on after his hogwarts years or during. Looking forward to sirus black and Harry potter meeting .if harr odison become more powerful and possibly king of asgard.

please come back and finish this story. You are such a good writer

I hope that when Harry comes out to the world that he is a Prince that he rectifies the story and
lockheart gets exposed as a fraud.

Pretty good story!

Helluva opening.

je ne peux pas traduire ton histoire sais dommage car elle me plaisait beaucoup

Hola, vas a continuar con esta historia?

re re re re leyendo esta gran obra! Me encanta esta historia.
Espero estes bien y que algun dia puedas seguirla.

i absolutely love this! is this fanfic going to go through all seven hp and all of the marvel movies?

Odin being an asshole