Where's chapter 3

I never get tired of reading and rereading this story

Half pay is all Sasuke gets for attempting to murder his teammate? Why is there no author willing to turn Sasuke into a dildo with a pulse? He has the Sharingan, that's all the village really needs from him, they definitely don't need his attitude. Imagine a Yamanaka with the Sharingan, I think their family jutsu would mutate and allow actual telepathy, or even putting the Sharingan with the Kurama clan, their Genjutsu is devastating enough, add the Copy Wheel Eye.

Why don't any authors, who wish to bash Sasuke, turn him into a living dildo? Sasuke's offense should at the very least get him removed from the ninja program, if anybody else pulled that crap, they'd likely be imprisoned, but because of plot armor they let him get away with a slap on the wrist. One of these days, when someone writes a Sasuke Retrieval Mission, where Naruto is successful in bringing him back, they should have normal eyes transplanted for his Sharingan, and given Tsunade's medical knowledge, have him made into a catatonic breeding doll.
The village needs the Sharingan, they don't need the Curse of Hatred, and only the strongest Kunoichi would be eligible for insemination via Sasuke-doll.

Rizzler no jutsu

great story. the people who complain early on clearly don't understand what fanfiction is really about. it's innovation, some originality, and twists and turns. fanfiction is were those who think differently can share how they thought something could of turned out differently in their favorite shows or manga's or even books. also they can't tell what plot building is about

kiddy bullshit trash fic

Naruto definitely doesn't look anything like Naruto, Sakura goes from treating Naruto like garbage to starting to like him and kiss him in a few minutes? How disgusting, Sakura is excessively obsessed with the Uchiha, she's not going to change like that in 5 minutes just because Naruto tells her he's not going to keep trying to date her.

making anko a coward is unnatural, mask or not...

this chapter is like having a sign saying "NONSENSE STORY, SUPER OOC CHARACTERS, PLEASE LEAVE IF YOU DON'T WANT TO SEE NARUTO ACT LIKE HE'S AN IMPOSTOR FOR NO REASON"

having naruto act like an anti-pervert and treating all men like trash... "I'm sorry for my gender" sounds like woke trash, no thanks

ps: yugao thinks about not mentioning naruto's huge resistance to anko, as if she were a pervert looking for sex, but here you treat her like a coward who doesn't want any contact with men... you're not even coherent

the rest of the chapter has made me decide to abandon your abandoned story, congratulations

can you add karin

...sasuke will get curb stomped by the lightning kitty, and it shall be GLORIOUS!

i do not actually hate sasuke, just to be clear. i just find him to be a whiny little bitch in the earlier parts of the franchise.

oh, and boruto does not exist, nothing you say will convince me otherwise, I live in permanent denial, this will not change, you cannot change my mind, do not try.

i acknowledge some of the lore, and some of the otsutsuki abilities. but that is it. any series that lets Naruto and hinata get jumped and removed from play that easily, and expects us to buy their retcon? it is an abomination to my eyes, and i will continue to deny its entire existence till the day i die.

kishimoto ROYALLY fucked up with pretty much EVERYTHING in that series.

6843?
yes or no?

got my vote for her. she was way too cute to he used as a sacrifice for the snake pedo

i meant just Kurenai. Kin tiu can do however you want. She just got a raw deal in the anime and was really cute too.

please save Kin and Kurenai should be in. I even have a way to get them in that almost no one has.

ah ah ah Kakashi. He isn't your student anymore. Good riddance.