|Reviews for Open Road|
| wishfulthinking123 chapter 14 . 7/2
I saw some of the previous reviews on this story and could not help but write one of my own, one that accurately represents this story and the protagonists. The way you write is compelling and poetic. The dreamscape nature of the story is particularly addictive, and it wraps me into Rory and Jess' private bubble. Personally, I love the road trip element, and you perfectly explore the dynamic of a relationship as it slowly evolves to face new events and challenges. It can be quite dark and heart-wrenching, as seen with Jess' attempts to make money, but it can also be beautiful and you explore this in the sensuous and passionate nature of their relationship.
This is the Rory and Jess story I have been waiting to read. I hope you continue writing, you are really talented.
P.S. If you like dreamscapes, I recommend reading House of Incest by Anais Nin. It's prose poetry and one of the best things I have ever read. :)
| Superratty chapter 14 . 6/22
This was beautiful
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/1
Why is she still with him? She wanted to go with him and see what he is doing but he just left without her. She should dumb him and getting her life back on track! You are the worst rory&jess writer ever! This crap is just making one wish that they are not together and never Even met. That is how much you suck. You loser destroyed a wonderful couple like them by turning them into this trash!
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/1
You are a disgusting sick and twisted bitch! Jess would Never do something like that! He basically raped her! Just because he was mad he pushed her down covered her mouth and fucked. You dumb little whore should rot in hell for ruining them like that. You are the lowest of the low.
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/1
Why are Gilmore Girls fanfiction writers always such prudes? Doesn't deserve the m rating that's how boring this is!
| o4theLUVof7-Eleven chapter 4 . 7/23/2010
i dunno, its probaly from my tiny Breakfast club obsession that i've currently acquired, but his audition has been coming along fantastically in my oppinion when he does the little 'sex brought to conversation' thing. i kinda love it
| boredliteratireader chapter 14 . 2/3/2007
omfg...cant believe i havent read this one...
this is kinda late...but u deserve so many reviews...
one word to describe ur writing...wow...
| theedgeofthedesert chapter 14 . 7/24/2006
great story. you're an amazing writer.
| de Leon chapter 14 . 1/22/2006
Wow...this was wow...beautiful, enticing, captivating, and all other adjectives that describe some of the best writing I've read in a long time. I could most definitely see the Rory and Jess characters in the beginning, and then they took on this bold and new approach that made them a different Rory, a different, giving them a different story that could have never been played out on screen, for it was so real, it could hardly be put into words. Congratulations on this awesome tale. I hope you write amazing original fiction like this, and get published so that the whole world can realize the power of an author's imagination.
| petitos grasshoppertje chapter 14 . 10/23/2005
Are you continueing this? Coz I read this a long long time ago...and I was wondering...I really want to know what is going to happen..
| coffee-addicted chapter 14 . 10/20/2005
This is brilliant! Such an amazing story! the way you give all the details, the way you show their actions, their feelings! there is so much anger, hunger, love, want, its a mix o feelings that makes the characters so real!I love their interaction and I had tears in my eyes over the end of this and the last chapter. Its definietly one of the most fantastics and well written stories Ive ever read! Truly loved it! Its going to my favorite stories list for sure!
| RogueHoney chapter 14 . 10/18/2005
great job. cant wait to read more. good work
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
This story has too much purple prose! I can't even make it through the first two paragraphs. It's so slow going, and it's only the beginning. Sorry, but I can't read this story. The plot sounds interesting, but not enough to make me read through the purple prose.
| vni64 chapter 14 . 5/1/2005
Fantastic fiction. Loved it.
| Jade-Tessier chapter 14 . 1/9/2005
love the darkness and the passion.
keep it up :)