|Reviews for Open Road|
| o4theLUVof7-Eleven chapter 4 . 7/23/2010
i dunno, its probaly from my tiny Breakfast club obsession that i've currently acquired, but his audition has been coming along fantastically in my oppinion when he does the little 'sex brought to conversation' thing. i kinda love it
| boredliteratireader chapter 14 . 2/3/2007
omfg...cant believe i havent read this one...
this is kinda late...but u deserve so many reviews...
one word to describe ur writing...wow...
| theedgeofthedesert chapter 14 . 7/24/2006
great story. you're an amazing writer.
| de Leon chapter 14 . 1/22/2006
Wow...this was wow...beautiful, enticing, captivating, and all other adjectives that describe some of the best writing I've read in a long time. I could most definitely see the Rory and Jess characters in the beginning, and then they took on this bold and new approach that made them a different Rory, a different, giving them a different story that could have never been played out on screen, for it was so real, it could hardly be put into words. Congratulations on this awesome tale. I hope you write amazing original fiction like this, and get published so that the whole world can realize the power of an author's imagination.
| petitos grasshoppertje chapter 14 . 10/23/2005
Are you continueing this? Coz I read this a long long time ago...and I was wondering...I really want to know what is going to happen..
| coffee-addicted chapter 14 . 10/20/2005
This is brilliant! Such an amazing story! the way you give all the details, the way you show their actions, their feelings! there is so much anger, hunger, love, want, its a mix o feelings that makes the characters so real!I love their interaction and I had tears in my eyes over the end of this and the last chapter. Its definietly one of the most fantastics and well written stories Ive ever read! Truly loved it! Its going to my favorite stories list for sure!
| RogueHoney chapter 14 . 10/18/2005
great job. cant wait to read more. good work
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
This story has too much purple prose! I can't even make it through the first two paragraphs. It's so slow going, and it's only the beginning. Sorry, but I can't read this story. The plot sounds interesting, but not enough to make me read through the purple prose.
| vni64 chapter 14 . 5/1/2005
Fantastic fiction. Loved it.
| Jade-Tessier chapter 14 . 1/9/2005
love the darkness and the passion.
keep it up :)
| Jade-Tessier chapter 13 . 1/9/2005
interesting chapter! love maggie's attitude and naivete.
the end of this chapter kinda reminds me of great gatsby... keep it up :)
| aseret789 chapter 4 . 12/26/2004
This story is amazing. You write magically-it reminds me of On The Road or The Sun Also Rises or...I don't know what. You evoke that FEELING, that inexplicable thing, like you're in love and drunk on spring air and about to do something exciting.
Your writing is beautiful, inimicable. Literate, quick, with clever dialogue and description that manages to catch a time and an emotion and a situation in just a few words.
It's heartfelt and sincere without being cheesy. It is very honest. Every word of it is lovely; I hope that you become a published writer at some point in your life-you would be brilliant at it.
Great work and keep writing.
| WickedWiccan1 chapter 14 . 12/25/2004
Wow. That's all I can say. I was completly blown away at how well this was written! It was sad, romantic, adn just amazing. I love this fic so much! I was crying at the end, seriously! Please write more!
| louisvuitton chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Amazing Story! Still wainting for you to continue... PLEAZE
| CnK chapter 14 . 8/18/2004
whoa... intense. awesome, awesome job. it's beautiful.