Looking forward to Chapter 21.

Looking forward to Chapter 21.

Low key boring and annoying

ah, no Sona thats disappointing. Couldn't you make an OC friend of Rias mom to kill off instead?

That sacred gear is a little ridiculous tbh.

? Vasco Strada the strongest human has Durandal right now. Not some wannabe templar

if naruto is the same age as sairog he cant be the same age as rias...

For chapter 10, I have a small problem, why did you say Zeoticous is high class in terms of power? I was pretty sure it was stated in canon that he's Ultimate class?

This story just isn’t for me. While I see the appeal Naruto is just kinda weak. While its not for me i could see others enjoying the story. So kudos to you

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Who the fuck says both their last names naruto uzumaki gremory thats cringe just decide on one

Soooo much edgelording.

Disappointing

friend naruto is a demigod since he is the reincarnation of ashura the youngest son of the sage of the 6 paths

friend naruto has his sage mode transformation of the 6 paths

Naruto has a rinnegan and sasuke's sharingan

dude make naruto x yasaka love story fic

friend put yasaka as a couple of naruto

naruto x yasaka

So he tries to apparently needs to make friends and instead of both him and the young ball child bonding over their trauma you make naruto " accidently " insult said child, oh yea because from an authors standpoint that makes sooo much sense in case you couldn't tell I'm both sarcastic and a smartass. No it made absolutely no sense to do that so why