That was so sad that I need a fanfic of this fanfic where Usagi and the Sailor Scout combine their powers to purify the people like Neo!Queen Serenity did in the future in order to save Earth. Well it was mentioned in the anime if not shown but she did purify people since the Dark Moon family like Prince Diamond's parents and such had refused to accept and were banished from Earth. Or like how in the first season where innocent people had actually been monsters from the negaverse that had been reincarnated as normal people/animals and Beryl's powers reverted them but then Usagi purified them again. Or I guess how Queen Serenity turned those monsters into people in the first place during the end of the Silver Millennium as she ensured the people of the moon and the Sailor Scouts would reincarnate to get to live out normal lives. She must have let the people/creatures of Earth that died from the Negaverse taking over Earth reincarnate too.

What a twist, the scouts brought the end of a world (the Dark Kingdom), that was such a sad thing. To keep peace some sacrifices had to be done. This is a nice fic that tries to explain the reclutance to sacrifice people in the Heart Snatched Arc.

a classic. I love all your stories esp Secret

Very well done! How has this not reached the general readership of SM fandom? I mean, counting my fav you'll have exactly one per year since publication, and that's just ridiculous for a work of this size and quality! Well written, well executed plotwise, and very interesting in terms of world building/subcreation. Good characterization, and character development. Fitting size - neither rushed nor drawn out - and a nice fit into the upcoming canon storyline.

For a while it made me think of a book I've read, _The Descent_ by Jeff Long, which also has a not-exactly-human civilization in caves below the ocean. Unfortunately, I can't really recommend it - while it has a very intriguing world, and the plot starts out quite good, there are far too many quasi-scientific misconceptions for my suspension of disbelief to work properly, and I just plain dislike the ending - but this reminded me of the good parts, and what it could have become if the author had cared about it beyond the cheap thrills he could fill it with. So, thank you for that, as well! :)

Pretty good story! I like it. I would like to receive more of these stories of Sailor Moon's adventures from time-to-time.

This is a very interesting twist and I have to say, I enjoyed reading it. I think what stood out to me the most was the balance you created - the fic never became too dark or too perky, but it was just right. I liked how you portrayed their inner struggles in the Dark Kingdom, not so much in words but by setting a certain mood. Overall I believe this is excellently written. :) I also especially liked Urawa's lines, but the dialogue was great everywhere.

For the Senshi to be portrayed this way is both horrifying and amazing. The anime doesn't really touch on it, but when you think about it after reading this, the conflict between Beryl and the Senshi was nothing short of a war. Sure, a magic-powered war without any guns, but still.

Lastly I wanted to say that the portrayal of those Dark Kingdom clans, or whatever they were, was very impressive. *nod* Great story.

Ja ne!

Great story. :) What an interesting perspective to show. I was wondering if the nightmares Rei was having at the end of the story signaled a sequel?

Classic.

It was interesting, and well written. Keep it up.

Ooooooo! Very well written! I liked it! Liked it a lot! Nicely detailed, and the way you reffered to the Senshi's roles in the Dark Kingdom... just... WOW. Keep up the good work!

oh that was really really good. i think that's the first time i've ever read a story that gave a good reason of WHY and HOW. why did beryl attack, how did she get all those monsters, stuff like that. this was a very original story with wonderfully descriptive writing. and that part about sharing a bad experience that might ruin a wonderful friendship, let's just say that's me and my friend in a nutshell. i hope you keep writing because you have a magnificent talent. ;P

This was a fascinating idea. The other side of the coin is a hard place to be sympathetic when exploring, as it is often easier to write the "bad guys" off as being merely mindlessly evil. You did an excellent job with this story. You might want to check the formatting, but other than that, it was great!