Reviews for Avalon Bond |
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![]() ![]() Update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This author really has a thing for older women, doesn't he? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the chapter! |
![]() ![]() El shirou entrenado por scatach en la siguientes singularidad aparecera |
![]() ![]() Aparecera el shirou entrenafo por escatach en la siguiente singularidad |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to pop in and show support and say that your Naruto fanfictions were a major part of my childhood and teenage years, back when you still went by Naruto Enthusiast. hope you keep writing for many years more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh, so Percival take Mordred's place |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Chapter |
![]() ![]() When’s the next chapter? This is like the only fic that’s being updated and can’t wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() But there are eight singularities, not seven |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if you'll include Adam or Moses in this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if you'll ever include... ADAM? Also, Archer (Emiya) is reffered to as EMIYA, so you can call him EMIYA and not Archer going forward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm The story is good, however the actual writing could use improvement. Making it more fluid and consistent would certainly improve the experience. I suggest improving your grammar, I use grammarly myself. |
![]() ![]() El shirou de shadow spear podria aparecer en la singularidad de Babilonia como un servanto con arturia como familiar asi despues de esa singuralidad se quedan en chandea |