"She leapt on her Cleansweep 260 ..."

You got the naming conventions mixed up. The Cleansweeps use lower numbers – including five, six, seven, and eleven. The Comet series uses the bigger numbers, including Two-Sixty and Two-Ninety.

Oh my God. If I could afford it, I'd pay to see this story continued/finished. First story I've read of this pairing, and I fucking love it

I think that this is the first one I’ve read that had Harry with Angelina, and while different, it was still a compelling read. I’m not usually one who reads a fanfic for the lemons, but it was still quite enjoyable to read.

I don't think it's been even a year, but I had to reread this. You have something magnificent here.

Hermoso ️️️️

Sneaky sneaky Hermione asking for the map!

Anyone who read those scenes (in canon) and then thought snivellus was anything more than a psychotic death eater scumbag should probably fuck themselves with a hot curling iron so they can get Harry's perspective a little more clearly. Repeated applications may (will almost certainly) be necessary.

Fantastic job of circling, spinning, and exploding into passion.

Ack! Not awkward, that was hot as hades!

Very nice slow build.

Just sad this wasn't longer. You're a great writer

That was wonderful story, thank you.

This was so wonderful.

Absolutely amazing, I have read few stories with a better pairing.

This is beautiful, and an amazing testament to one choice, one moment, changing everything. I do believe this would change everything, and thank you for sharing it.