The author is 100% correct. Hermione would not eat Harry out. She’s more likely to set a professor on fire for him.

One of the best Romance fics i’ve read on this site, you have a talent for writing.

Nice work

I love the story

Lol I love the AN. Sets fire on people for Harry, no doubt.

Nope. All the nope. Why? Hermione is a nerdy, bookish (but pretty in her own way) bushy haired, bossy, WHITE self insert of kid JK. Stop blackwashing our fandoms. It's not edgy. It's not interesting. It's insulting. Extremely so.

But then again, it's apparently not just ok to blackwash, but encouraged even. Because according to the so called "main steam" you can't be racist towards white people. Right? Right. Piss off you racist prick.

Fucking pathetic. With the way you’re writing Harry, I hope this thing stays at nine chapters. Don’t need more of this shit.

It's a pity the story ended but, for the theme of it, it ended at the right spot. Thank you for writing this amazing story.

Love the story! Awesome job.

I did not expect the news of the Harpies. It great to see dreams becoming reality.

Could you not tone down Snape? It's horrible to read something so negative.

It's been awhile since I read the previous chapter and I can't remember if I reviewed any or not but I just want to say that I really love this fic. It isn't smut and you make it serious enough with people working through their issues. I love it.

That was great. A wonderful story, I'd never considered Angelina with Harry before but you really brought it to life.

Hey, what an amazing story!
while, like everyone else here, I would love to read more, I am very happy with how the story ends. I think it's great the way you did it. You told your story and there is really no need to tell us about the Horcruxes and Voldemort and how they get married and their children and grandchildren. Anyone who is into fanfiction has read it hundreds of times already in some form or another. Your story is fine where it ends. That being said, I'll follow you, just in case you change your mind about a sequel, lol.
I like how you combine smut with an actual story and how your smut is properly written. It doesn't feel like porn, more like a good story that simply doesn't skip the good moments in favor of younger audiences. Enough detail to get an idea but not so much that it feels like a dissection. Realistic too.
The unusual pairing worked out really well. I'm always a fan of something new and this worked out better than I would have expected.

Keep going, great work!

This is the first Harry/Angelina story I've read and I enjoyed it. You wrote the pairing realistically and it fit well into the story.
I seriously hope that you're going to write an epilogue, sequel or a longer version of this story.