Reviews for Man of Iron, Child of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know that im reading this for the I don’t know how many times yet, but the main thing that I have to complain about is that you just jump from one area to another without any break in between them… |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd love to see a series of interconnected one-shots about Albus and Steve in Europe for WWII. Like a buddie cop road movie. Heck what if the bird on the logo for SHIELD wasn't an eagle, but a phoenix. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you imagine Sirius Black at the airport fight in Civil War, especially with some Stark Tech fuckery. |
![]() ![]() You know, Tony really doesn't need to get Vernon fired to make his life really suck. All he has to do is buy Grunnings and demote Vernon to to Janitor for the company. That even lower than the mail room. Maybe even do an audit of every account he ever handled to make sure he didn't steal anything. Now it should be very interesting to read how Harry introduces both Tony and Steve to Diagon Alley. Then to the Goblins of Gringotts. |
![]() ![]() Good thing Harry had enough sense and foresight to send Hedwig away till he could escape Privet Prison cause you can bet Vernon would kill her! I'm wondering how Harry's going to tell Tony about magic along with his attending Hogwash. Don't bother arguing with me over the name as it's totally true! If Vulturewurst can easily get into the so-called safest school in the world it ain't that safe! It wouldn't be a surprise that after Tony hears about all the BS that's gone on in that so-called school he pulls Harry out and transfers him to one in America. One where Good Ole Fumblemort has no influence at. If the old meddler truly wants to defeat Vulturewurst let him get off his lazy old ass and actually fight him! |
![]() ![]() This is quite a surprise. I really didn't know what to expect from the title. But now, after the first chapter I like what I've read so far. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() entire story is void of any magic. just adults arguing the whole time with fix it tropes |
![]() ![]() ![]() out of all the magical things you could have had them do you choose the boring ice cream trip and to bully poor olivander. smells like indy harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muy bueno ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to point out that unless they take Peters wand hell simply apparate out |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is too slow. It won't ever go anywhere. This will take years of frequent updates at the very least, and that's unlikely to happen. Poor time investment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good read thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dam I am Sad and Mad... :P Never thaought of the Galleons to Ship joke and sad i never did that. LOVEING the joke through . Good Job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. I’m looking forward to the sequel. |