Reviews for The Upside of Heartbreak |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I’m so hoping for a continuation of this. Just love this story so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Another chapter! I had to reread it after so long. You continue to deliver the same excellent quality of story! Hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an excellent story so far. Fantastic writing. His garage lineup is impressive, although some seem a bit on the nose for me. Unlike some other storiesnot having any issues keeping speakers or povs separated, which I’m thankful for. I do hope this story continues and gets a happy ever after… Also, *waves* hello fellow bc dweller. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Scott's getting a very big look at life without the manufactured drama he's been surrounded by his entire life...and he may just get better footing to continue down that path. But, there's what's waiting for him when he returns to the 'pasture' that awaits him...droppings included... The gang's visit was less volatile than feared for Astrid, and some level of acceptance from Cami and Theo that may help for full acceptance once they are more comfortable with each other... Astrid, though...seemed to be a compressor tank that was going to explode if what Hayden started earlier in the day hadn't been taken to completion...That small 'pop-off valve' moment before Scott and the Gang met up was just enough to keep Astrid from going full-on 'There she Blows!', until her participation in Hayden's 'Banquet of Ecstasy' on the island...before they called it a night...much to her eternal satisfaction... She's noticed a pattern between them, though. Sparring as foreplay, more teasing at home before...both get what they were after...and really mess up the sheets, or much of the apartment... One thing, though, Astrid is learning much about herself that she never got to know, with Scott, that she's discovering with Hayden...a bit of exhibitionism is probably the tip of that iceberg...LOL! CB73 |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY YOU ARE BACK! You have no idea how happy I was to see your update. notice. Absolutely cute chapter. Totally worth the wait Why do I have the feeling that I am gonna hate Spitelout soon? Wonder what kind of shit will hit the fan. Or just the Haddock parents showing up ? :D Awww sooo darn happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huge begging eyes for an update *.* Mean while: rereading. Again :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Archipelia Royalty" indeed. And Astrid is his queen, whether the world (or university) likes it... or not. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I just finished to reread the Story again from the beginning and I desperately hope that this isn't the last chapter... The entire Story was very enjoyable to read and I cant wait for the next (promised ;P) chapter to drop. I would love to see how the relationship of Hayden and Scott progresses from here. :) Anyways please continue to keep up the good work and have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope everything is okay with you. I really miss your writing |
![]() ![]() Please update soon! This is such a good story! Keep up the good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, I don't usually get hooked so easily by HTTYD Modern Fanfics, but this is a truly well written story so far. I love it! Hope you keep writing, I would love to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() Please update soon!, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter once again I applaud you for your spectacular writing capabilities nice touch adding the bolide to Hayden's garage (i mean is it even road legal probably not but i mean it hayden he’s rich and badass). Also speaking of rich and badass i got an idea for your a possible next story since you like hiccup or hayden here being a complete badass and stupidly rich a hiccup as ironman could be really good. but im not sure if your into superhero stuff so. I’ll leave you this for inspiration if you want to do my idea. Book is by Supersandman and rumblingnightcutter called ironfury which is httyd set in the ironman universe pretty short but good for being written in 2014 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’M OBSESSED Pls update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scott's tutor-visit seems to have brought up some of the 'turmoil' in his life between himself, his Dad, Sabrina, Astrid, expectations...and Hayden...Many of the imposed 'absolutes' in Scott's life are falling apart when they actually are compared to the reality he's been walled off from by his upbringing and said 'expectations' dumped on him by his Dad and by those who live by those expectations... He's learning, while still interjecting old reactions to the 'New Hayden', that someone grew up and it's being gently shown to him, he might start to grow up too... For now, he's taking that lifeline offered and maybe Scott will learn more than the school work he needs to stay on the team...and that he had sold Hayden short all those years ago. Just like his Dad, Hayden's Dad and all the others, had all those years ago, too. CB73 |