Reviews for Stranger things 4 the boy from the future
some rando chapter 3 . 8/10/2020
Can we not ignore the fact that "Benny" is obviously the author? ;) Great job so far Benny. By the way, I would recommend trying less hard to combine sentences. Take an idea, and run with it for a bit. Add more descriptions, and then your writing would improve greatly!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/10/2020
Sorry this is just to difficult to read. I suggest getting a beta.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/7/2020
Getting better but you're still running sentences together. Its difficult to tell whose talking.
mxlti.fanficsx chapter 6 . 8/3/2020
Amazing story! I love it but the only problem is that it is in massive chunks and it's hard to read. We can't really tell who is saying what and when. Other than that, amazing story
Reviewer chapter 5 . 7/30/2020
This is a great story! The only issue is that it’s hard to read. The dialogue is mixed with the actual story, and that’s confusing. Otherwise, good story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2020
Good idea but you got to break this up and separate dialog. I recommend getting a beta.
Stranger Things chapter 2 . 7/26/2020
This is a good story, but it’s hard to read. Some of the English is a little broken, and the dialogue is difficult cause there’s nothing separating it from the text. Just want to help you out, continue on my guy!