Honestly i think you are making Obi Wan, Padme, and Ahsoka, to quick and smart to figure things out.

Like the entire council didn't suspect Palpatine about being Sidious, yet those three either thought about it, found him suspicious, or didn't seem to shocked by it? Come off it.

The reactions aren't making sense either, because Anakin literally just thought about Palpatine being Sidious as well, yet he is surprised about Windu attacking the chancellor? Why? Is Anakin retarded or something.

are you still planning to finish this or is it abandoned?

*Mandalorian, for my chapter 1 review, as well as

*Real, for really

something I want to say about the future of Star Wars (as a whole) is, with the Sequel Trilogy now over (as of this review, for 3 years now), it seems like the future will just involve shows, games, comics, etc, to make money off, no really endgame planned (besides I guess for the Manalorian shows probably).

then again, this question was definitely thought about during the 2000s (before Disney bought Lucasfilm in 2012), when the Prequel Trilogy was over, there were still comics, novels, and games coming out (all of which are no longer canon, which happened in 2014, 8 years ago), while it was also believed that George Lucas was going to make a Sequel Trilogy as well.

speaking of George's Sequel Trilogy, base on what we know about it, it would have definitely screwed with what was already established in the post-ROTJ books (which are no longer canon, again this happened in 2014, 8 years before this review), but then again, George never actually consider the EU as canon, he only saw the movies and the 2008 Clone Wars show as canon (and that's all Disney kept as canon when they bought Lucasfilm in 2012 and made the EU into Legends in 2014), which is probably why the EU had a lot of continuity errors (maybe more then the Fox X-Men films), but oh well I guess.

Hay it has now been It has now been 1 year and 1 day since you last updated this story so for the love of it all please post the next chapter soon or atheist let us know when the next chapter is coming out please.

It's not a bad story most Star wars fanfiction writers often a better stories than they do worse so like I said I look forward to reading more and then like I said previously the story is actually has potentially good thank you for at least trying and I'll take a look at that YouTube channel sometime soon thank you for the suggestion

yeah this should've been a recap video not a music video. they're fun once in a while but this is annoying.

Umbara arc pls?

Hay would you please update this story soon please it has been forever and may suggest you either do the next chapter with them watching something to do with bobba fett or kylo ren

I have a request, a video from the YouTuber Star Wars Explained, the video is called "Star Wars: The Complete Canon Timeline (2022)", which was uploaded on May 4th 2022.

you could do this video, or wait until Star Wars Explained makes his Star Wars timeline video for 2023 (which will be uploaded on May 4th 2023), just so that it'll have the newer stuff in the Star Wars timeline (that'll be in it by 2023), so yeah.

You doing good?

You should have them watch Star Wars: Clone Wars 2-D Micro-series. Just to see how they would react.

Please update the story

gonna be honest here with ya man, this may need to be rewritten somewhat.

your characters seem to contradict themselves every other sentence or paragraph.

like anakin already suspects palpatine as being sidious, yet he is wondering why windu is fighting palpatine?

not to mention padme and ahsoka being so accepting and idk, calm? about palpatine being sidious is wrong, like there is no reason the two of them should be instantly accepting of this, nor should they, at least ahsoka shouldn't, be so suspicious of palpatine.

accepting him of shifty and shady behavior is one thing, but to think he is a sith lord with no real evidence but her feelings? yeah no, ahsoka needs to quit being a mary stu. sorry if this comes off as rude, but surely you can understand why ahsoka shouldn't be able to see through sidious the way you wrote her as being able to.

hey not sure if you are still invested in this fic, but on youtube there's a channel called royishgoodlooks, who has a bunch of star wars songs,

such as

i'm your father

bring balance to the force

padme's song

the chosen one

mind tricks don't work on me

last jedi knight

let the past die

a few others there as well, but these i think are the best ones, just thought i would mention it, i think the jedi might appreciate the songs, padme might like anakin singing her song for her, and anakin might find luke singing to be hilarious, lol