Reviews for Carry On My Wayward Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i'm pretty sure jiraiya will love to have students like issei and his two friends and if you're going write romance story at least have it build it up through the bonds istead of too fast romantic relationship |
![]() ![]() ![]() isn't there a simple transformation jutsu? He could hide his identity while searching for information or tailing people. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good series please keep up |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're calling Naruto of all people with his unique look, unassuming. No offense but are you high? I don't think Issei has ever once in this shit been called unassuming and you want to use that word with Naruto. I'm sorry I have to be that guy but this gives me Izuku and him being "plain" vibes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so where's the next update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome, boosted gear Naruto is a rare in fanfiction. I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Naruto announcing his presence before he even got there left me feeling he was pointlessly parading whilst everyone was escaping. You're writing is very good, and this story is amazing but for some reason this chapter has me feeling like I've bitten into a bitter fruit |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss Issei already... This chapter was incredibly frustrating tho, although things were happening they felt out of hand as the pov was switching too often and Naruto announcing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was an amazing read so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story so far! Looking forward to what's next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo here comes the storm! Super exciting! |
![]() ![]() Quite the ‘author self-insert’ you have here.. While the writing itself isn’t bad, this isn’t Naruto. |