Reviews for Carry On My Wayward Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Waiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter xD Cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Its not often people place an UNNERFED Naruto into another story. A bottom tier grunt like Raynare really shouldn't be any issue at all for practically anyone from Naruto's u-verse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was expecting it to follow the cringy killed by ryanare thing , much nice dude, kuodos |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a bomb ass chapter dude im glad that this version of naruto isn't needed for no reason and the fact that you actually used his killing intent was great no need for Chakra or anything I cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy molly this chapter is lit man stay safe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep the chapters coming I love this naruto n u gotta pair him with Rias they r too good of a match |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shoot, ngl i was expecting some BS in this chapter but I’m pleasantly surprised with how things are turning out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hidden Leaf Village Secret Finger Jutsu: One Thousand Years of Death! Haha. This chapter was fantastic, Although the part of Naruto as part of the Fans who praise and do not stop acting like fools without taking their eyes off Rias and Akeno seems somewhat contradictory, since Naruto hated being part of that in the Ninja Academy and disliked the people who behaved like this, but well, just simple details. Something that left me confused was the final part, I do not know if Raynare hallucinated because of his fear or if it was an illusion product of some type of Genjutsu, I hope it is not the last, I don't think it makes sense to give Naruto a Doujutsu from his world that is inferior to the power that he possesses, I hope you update it soon since it is somewhat intriguing how the story progresses that until now is great and as a pious request it would be good to know if you have a planned pairing, if it will be unique or Harem, I say it to know if I should prepare myself mentally Haha (since I'm not a fan of the Harem), well, greetings and good luck friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() ignore what the below review said to kill issei. it is contradict to naruto's action and issei has plot armor which you can alter of course. he might have irredeemable quality but you are the author, you can change how issei will grow with naruto's existence. also, killing issei is boring. as for now, i am still curious why he attend school despite not obliged to do so with him capable of using chakra and cover himself. naruto also truly lacks awareness (many fanfics did this) for not gathering information about the supernatural world. which is why needed to explain later. i hope naruto doesn't side much with devils, too much already and honestly, devils are glorified good people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest I'm really enjoying this story a lot, and it a good break from the other Naruto crossovers with High School DXD. Overall really do like this story, but got to say that there are some parts that are kinda blank, but feel like you'll fill them in later on in the story. But have to ask Naruto is a 3rd year right? That can you please make it where Naruto doesn't really have to show more of what he's capable of, sure I understand that if his life is in danger that a good excuse, but in the spar against Kiba I feel like he doesn't need to go all out. But at the same time Kiba may do something to force Naruto to retaliate back at full force, and I for one don't want that to happen. Anyways sorry for the rambling, but really and good start to the story and hope to see it grow later on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job on the story so far, but I feel as if there is something wrong. Naruto, despite not exactly being the best shinobi in terms of espionage, should've at least done his best in making sure he doesn't exist in the public's eyes. He's a shinobi, and the very first thing he should've done in unknown territory is to collect information while being discreet and unknown. The story also mentions just how much Naruto does not like school. If he doesn't feel the need to attend school, why does he? Was he simply caught, during a mistake or some such? This is your story, and thus your's only to create and decide upon, but I feel that these are some plot holes that would improve the story if addressed, even if just mentioned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As long as this doesnt turn into a useless harem I will be happy. Just cause issei's character goals is to be a harem lord doesnt mean every hischool dxd fic needs it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please kill issei off, hes a bad character. He has no redeeming qualities whatsoever. Honestly someone like koneko deserves draig way more than issei. |