Reviews for Carry On My Wayward Son
Mistletainn chapter 7 . 1/17/2022
Eh, I don't see the Nerf. Though I wonder why Naruto seems to hold animosity towards Kurama. Is this Pre-shippuden Naruto? He sounds like to be old enough for being Post-Shippuden Naruto, though probably early Shippuden.
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 7 . 1/16/2022
If he does end up getting Issei's sacred gear I don't really see a point to it. What's the point of adding in more power to a character with already ridiculous amounts of power? There's no point in it beyond sounding cool and power fantasy. It feels like a cop-out to just add more stuff to his already convoluted set. I worry about it being organically given to his character. I worry even more about the possibility of adding more arbitrary powers to him. You might be able to do it once, but twice, or thrice? At a certain point, it will become harmful to the story, and said point entirely depends on your ability as a writer.

So good luck with that I guess...
CashFitzer chapter 7 . 1/16/2022
Brought Sage-mode too early in the game. Honestly, a wind chakra enhanced kunai and his speed would've been more than enough to deal with this trash.
Aggrandize chapter 7 . 1/15/2022
Bruh what. Naruto is only at (lower!) Ultimate Class with sage mode? I think you are overestimating what Ultimate Class is lol. Or underestimating how strong sage mode is.
D-Na25 chapter 7 . 1/13/2022
The thrill is killing me.
I really can't wait to see what will Naruto and Rias relationship will be..

Will he join Rias peerage like other's author do?
Or will you make a different path and make something new?

Thanks for the chapter... I hope it won't come to the point that this story becoming like others. Same plot, just with a bit different spice.
Dragozilla chapter 7 . 1/13/2022
First time I’ve read a Naruto/DxD x-over in years and to be honest, it’s nothing really new or innovating. It just looks like it’s going to be the same type of DxD x-over as countless other writers have done. Naruto goes to Kuoh, saves Issei, gets a harem, become super or God-Like powerful, blah, blah, blah. Nothing really interesting, at least in my view.

Black Dragon was more exciting then this story. At least that was something new and different. Shame it’s just a One-Shot and not a full story.
Vercingetorix Rex chapter 7 . 1/13/2022
I still think that Naruto becoming Ddraig's host is a mistake and that the Boosted Gear should have been sent back to Heaven.

in my eyes, another character would be more "suitable": Irina! Irina because she is Issei's childhood friend, what better tribute to her deceased childhood friend than to take over the role of Red Emperor (or Empress) Dragon?

just my opinion.
Slayer of The Abyss chapter 7 . 1/13/2022
Liking this so far, not many people have the stones to kill off an Mc and I'm really interested to see how this continues
omar.cornelius.9 chapter 7 . 1/12/2022
Naruto at this point cutting technique he use to cut the waterfall me learned it before he even learned sage mode.
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 7 . 1/12/2022
You have a terrible idea of the Naruto's world scaling powers. You are overpowering the DxD world to the high ends. DxD is like the RWBY world, quite weak in all reality. Chunin Exams Naruto would be where you would need to have Naruto where he would struggle against the likes of Kokabiel.

Even without Sage Mode Naruto would easily defeat the likes of Kokabiel.

Regardless good luck with the rest of this, the story has become stale. The OOC'ness doesn't help either.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/11/2022
Interesting and it seem this Naruto is more emotional than usual, not surprising given that he haven’t went to the Waterfall of Truth.

Wonder if it is possible that due as a consequence of him not going there, the darkness within himself isn’t going well but can be resolved later in other ways as I doubt the Waterfall of Truth is the only way for him to get past it plus the Dragon inside is more likely to be helpful about it than Kurama at this point when he eventually get Boosted Gear on.

As for Asia, wonder what plans you have for her as maybe even Diodora lost her given that Raynare did lose her which would be better than being in his peerage for obvious reasons because worse case scenario is that he caught her and put her in his peerage as she is being broken by him which is a fate worse than death.

Look like Naruto and Rias group is going to meet each other for real for the first time when you think about it, Naruto isn’t going be able to hide his abilities and Rias and co aren’t going be able to hid the fact that they are devils.

If am not mistaken, Naruto is using Senjutsu right now and something tells me that Koneko isn’t going have a positive reaction but Naruto could potentially bond with Koneko over that later on.

Wonder if Kalwarner is going to survive this as she at the very least has some sense and I don’t think fanfics really shows her much if any, tend to more focus on either Raynare or Milett.
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 6 . 1/12/2022
Naruto wouldn't break his Nindo for Issei. If he didn't do it for Sasuke he isn't going to do it for a nobody, which is what Issei is ultimately. Why you are making Naruto so OOC is beyond me. Could still write him in character and tell the story.

Naruto and Rias seemed like they focused far too much on Issei. Rias is a devil she won't actually care all that much about Issei, she would care more about the fallen. Issei is irrelevant to her thoughts same with Naruto. They were not friends, they were barely acquintences.

Sage Naruto would still destroy most of DxD. DxD is actually a pretty weak universe. Don't forget Naruto is a fighting genius. Rasenshuriken would kill 99% of DxD. He has the abilities to hit said people he would fight. Only 2 I don't see it killing would be Great Red in the Dimensional Gap and Ophis. Guess Trihexa as well though he wouldn't be a thing now. Rasenshuriken shits all over the Power of Destruction.

Your Naruto at the moment feels to much like Sasuke though. Truthfully I find it hard to believe this is Naruto especially with this chapter.
Brandon Boodoo chapter 7 . 1/11/2022
really you gonna not put the fight in this one? lame. go somewhere else with your cliffhanging bullshit.
manmathamanan2003 chapter 7 . 1/11/2022
I have a few questions. First is that Koneko said that it a 'Chakra user' not a senjutsu user. Naruto was in his sage mode form so why couldn't she sense him using senjutsu? Second does Naruto knows Rasenshuriken? Coz this Naruto is definitely after the pain fight so he should know that technique. Btw great chapter
tomoe-rinnegan chapter 7 . 1/11/2022
U should make kurama teach him fuinjutsu after all he was sealed in two uzumakis and some ninjutsu and don't make him trusting idiot who reveals his origins to everyone without thinking make him a bit more shinobish you know
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