Reviews for Carry On My Wayward Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its cool, but if it's 4th War Naruto who is send to DxD, he should be 18 Years old after one year being there. And where is Kurama ? The dude is a shinobi, he would not going school if he doesn't want. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have no idea how much I like this story. It's a good thing that you're not making Naruto get offed by raynare just for the sake of plot while ignoring how absolutely impossible this is. Honestly, I'd like it a lot if he stayed low key as much as he can rather than blow his own cover. Although that won't be possible since Issei isn't going to keep an event like this secret for long. Personally, I hope Naruto and raynare interact more but not to the point where he's trying to change her. This Naruto doesn't seem the type to care about stuff like that if the fact that he wasn't actively following Issei is any indication. If you make him join a peerage, I'll drop this story. It's as unrealistic and overused as that of Naruto landing in the underworld and feeling grateful for being saved by a creature of sin that turned him into a demon servant for possibly eternity. Why does he always crash in the underworld? why not heaven or Kyoto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() God damn I loved this two chapters so much. A different Naruto that says he doesn't need any friends but craves for them even if he refuses to admit it. Didn't lost to a low level fallen angel for not paying attention and managed to save Issei. Fucking yes my dude, thank you for this read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, really amazing chapter :D I'm really glad Naruto wasn't defeated as he is in every other Naruto and High school DXD crossover. I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personnaly, I was dreading this chapter, i was afraid (like the majority naruto/dxd crossover) that the confrontation between Naruto and Raynare wiĺl finish by naruto getting skew by spears because he "unexpectly" didn't pay attention to an enemy trying to kill him or he decide his body is great protection to save issei, or any other reason to make Naruto an easy pick for rias peerage... So thank you, you relieve my fear on this matter i really like where you are going with this story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good man |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting chapter, i think this story got the potential |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good chapter, though not enough to know what the true story really is but I liked it. Be sure to kill of Issei or something, he really annoys me |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this naruto hmmm I been waiting to read one like this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi i'm brazilian, and i really liked this chapter, very interesting and really cool i also hope you keep writing because i really liked this story. Now I only have one question, is Naruto going to have the kurama? And that you didn't reveal whether he had it or not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The title is wayward son. Who is the parent I wonder |
![]() ![]() Admittedly you're off to a good start. The characters are nicely written , good representation,although I did find a few grammatical errors every now and then. But that's alright. Now, for the future, I sincerely hope this won't be another naruto devil fic nor a mega harem fic. That's way too cliche these days. With that said I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Good luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting idea. I really like his freedom philosophy, it will make it really hard for him to be tied down again to a peerage |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |