Reviews for Carry On My Wayward Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I really like how you have kept Naruto as cannon. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is excellent. But i beg of you one thing: Don't turn Naruto into a pussy MC who will let a girl hit him just for a laugh. If you don't want your Naruto to retaliate, at least make him dodge the hit. I rate this story 9.5/10. However, if you turn him into a pussy MC, the rate will drop to 5/10. I'll delete it from my favorite list. The only thing i hate from Canon-Naruto is, he let sakura hit him just for laugh. You're not Japanese, right? Then you should not find comedy ini such violence. |
![]() ![]() Loved all 7 chapters and I can't wait for more soon so excited! |
![]() ![]() You know I have not seen or heard about Freed Selzen in your the fuck is he? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So naruto here is strong as when he defeated pain so most likely only high tiers opponents will wreck naruto like the gods or super devil class btw who will naruto join rias fallen angels or yasaka youkoi or vail small group or u got something else in plan and hope u don’t kill raynare lol and Will this be harem story a reasonable one take care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, cant wait for more. It's interesting that you have a Naruto from sometime between beating Pein and meeting Bee. A bit sad that Naruto have his chakra modes, but I think that Kurama's raw chakra will mix great with devil energy. Also really want to see a subspecies of Boosted Gear for Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn it a cliffhanger. And it was just getting good. Dohnaseek and the rest are so totally screwed. No way in hell they aren’t coming out of this either killed or brutally beaten to near death. I wonder how Rias and the rest of her peerage are going to react to seeing Naruto single-handedly took down Raynare’s group. What’s going to happen to Asia after this will she still join Rias’ peerage? Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great 2 chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There'll be peace when you are done. Cant wait to see what you have in store |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter bro continue soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it not possible to bring Issei back to life and reincarnate him as a devil? If not then Rias better try to get Naruto in her peerage. So I’m assuming this Naruto came into this world during or slightly after the time of the Pain Invasion arc. Now I wonder how Naruto is going to master using Kurama’s chakra without the proper training and guidance for it. He’s going to need get along with Kurama soon before he faces off against more powerful foes. Sage Mode, Shadow Clones, and even the Rasengan/Rasenshuriken can only take him so far in a fight. |
![]() ![]() All this justification of Naruto's power means nothing you clearly nerft him so you mean to tell me anyone ultimate class can challenge if not outright beat kage's because sage Naruto was stronger then most kage's |
![]() ![]() Dude, Sage Naruto plus Boosted Gear in its first form is overkill alone. Just take a few facts. Issei with the initial form of the Boosted Gear has to Boost several times to shoot a decent Dragon Shot at someone, that's several 10 seconds for each boost NEEDED for his Dragon Shot to work. I'll give you non accurate examples. Issei's power as a new devil is a 30 at best, Naruto's power without chakra is superhuman (see Rock Lee with his natural speed and strength allowing him to pull a tree's large roots with one hand during the chunin exams) is 100, and with chakra it is 200, and sage mode is 500. Grayfia is 15000. So, first form Boosted Gear boosting Sage Mode Naruto every 10 seconds; 10 seconds/1000, 20 seconds/2000, 30 seconds/4000, 40 seconds/8000, 50 seconds/16000! Get it? Then comes Scale Mail which removes the 10 second limit and allowed Issei in canon to Boost many more times over, and with Naruto's superhuman stamina, endurance, chakra and experience, he CAN boost a hundred times more than Issei ever could the first time he gained balance breaker. The only reason Issei worked as a character with Boosted Gear is because he had nothing going for him during the start, NEEDING the Boosted Gear to get near his opponents in strength, and it was only during the later half of the novels that he had grown his base devil powers. The reason fans dislike Naruto with Boosted Gear is because it makes Naruto beyond broken with Balance Breaker to the point he won't ever need any of Issei's canon forms, least of all Kurama which most fans prefer. When you mix Naruto's near immunity to have his chakra divided by Vali and the ability to double his own power, you get a characters that stomps Vali EVERY single time they meet. As long as you don't have Naruto struggling against most opponents, I think you'll be fine, but if you have him be defeated by the likes of Rias, Riser, Vali or Kokabiel then fans will start disliking the fic. Good luck. |
![]() ![]() Naruto x kalawarner ? Why not its never been done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad I found this hidden gem. keep it up Dear Author. I loved reading every bit of it. |