Reviews for Indian Ball |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Between Padma and Hermione? Is there subtext here or am I reading too much into the dialogue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice snippet. Other stories by you include Padma, sometimes with Hermione. I’m glad both witches are content to help Harry. We know who should be at the bottom of the lake instead of Ron now! I could see this eventually become H&P&H. At the very least, Hermione could end up as a bridesmaid (or even Harry’s ‘best man’!). Thanks. You should consider eventually migrating some of your stories to your account on AO3. If you wish, I can give you some recommendations as stories I think must get there. TGM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meh, 13 in a dozen shortie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This could have been the start of a great story |
![]() ![]() Honestly, I don't see the need to separate the twins...the Carrow twins would also be interesting...or Greengrass sisters... :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with this story as it looks like it's get more interesting with a few more chapters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see Harry brighten Padma’s evening after Ron ignored her and instead eye Hermione and Viktor with intense jealousy. At least Padma used the contraceptive charm to avoid any unwanted pregnancies. Great one-shot, keep up the hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is there a story of this as more than a one shot somewhere? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, a cute short romantic sex story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it and seriously can't wish it was longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable, and it leaves plenty of room for continuation if your muse ever decides to come back to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good |
![]() ![]() ![]() why did i never ship this two together? oh dear, we all in trouble~ to bad tho, this is just a One-Shot! lol, i think, i should search for more of this ship... like, right NOW! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great one-shot and what a wonderful night for Harry. Thanks for sharing! |