Reviews for Solo Tartarus Journey (Dark Percy) |
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![]() ![]() PRISONER |
![]() ![]() plz dont send him to Styx |
![]() ![]() Hello! This is an amazing story, and I love both the plot twists how you've kept close enough to the original storyline to make it seem like an AU but given it your own kick, so it sticks to the plot that you created. I have a request about when the 7 make it back to Camp Half-Blood. Could you pls change it so that we see a bit more of the camper's, Chiron's and Mr D's reactions to Percy returning and his new powers? THX Lots! |
![]() ![]() When will the next chapter be out |
![]() ![]() It's an amazing story pls come back and finish it |
![]() ![]() ![]() another story that never ends |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooooo... you just replaced the only noble thing Leo has ever done (Sacrificing himself) with Percy turning evil. Nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pros: I like how you changed the prophecy! Cons: Could you make it more lengthy like the first couple of chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy should be part of it, and what about his blood-bending? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how Percy said (Not directly) that Victoria was still immortal |
![]() ![]() ![]() That reunion was very realistic, more realistic than I realized! Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Maybe." Nico paused, "I mean yes, we WILL get him back Annabeth," I love that part! |
![]() ![]() I like it, but though I have no problem, my friends that I want to show this to mite could you have a cussing warning.️ |
![]() ![]() This is amazing please may we see Percy blood bending in front of the 7 |
![]() ![]() This is brilliant I can’t believe you haven’t done a love interest before it seems like you’re a natural |