Nice story, I enjoyed the read. Thank you for the story, I appreciate it.

You’re so close to the finish line, 2 chapters and an epilogue, that’s more than enough

Please finish it! It’s so close to being done! It’s one of my favorites

A wonderful story! I only wish it were finished…

Please update I really like this story and have read it plenty times and I can’t wait to see where the story goes and if you are about to post the next chapter thank you this is great also just get some revenge on the Olympian Gods they need to be put in there place Anyway just keep doing what you’re doing

This was the second fanfiction I’d ever read, after coming back to it months later…I can’t say I wasn’t disappointed that there was no new chapter. Please come back to it! I love the idea of Percy being underestimated a lot intelligence wise. I truely felt lost after completing the Percy Jackson and Heroes of Olympus series, this helped me delve into the amazing world of Fanmade works. Thank you so much as you’ve helped me in ways you can’t imagine by just writing this AU. Please return as you’re very talented! Sincerely, AthenaHyperFox

Don't give up on this fanfic, please!

I loved your whole book so far! If you wouldn’t mind keeping the…adultish activities to a low, if you put them in. I don’t think it would suit Percy and annabeth, unless done absolutely right. I don’t want to cringe! Also amazing work, can’t wait for the next chapter!

uhhh you havent finished...

This is AmaZhang! I am loving where this story is going... Keep up the awesome work!

So far the story has been a fun read for a much darker tone to the book. However, i feel you have pushed Leo’s character to the side in favour of more Percy stuff, which I feel it is fine to do that but i would like to see Leo being in the story more and not just off to the side to add some lightheartedness to the story in order to contrast Percy as he is now. If you don’t decide to go with my suggestion I will still read the novel as i am loving how you told out your story. Also, do love to see him use more of the powers he got in Tartarus. Thanks for listening to my thoughts.

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this fan fiction is way too good i’m loving it

First time I’ve seen a Victoria and Percy ship ngl it seems very nice