Reviews for The Maelstrom Jedi |
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![]() ![]() good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome job with this chapter |
![]() ![]() Awesome story! I love how you had Naruto join the Jedi Order and got an orange lightsaber. I also love how you had Naruto prepare for Order 66 and save the Jedi Order. I personally enjoyed Anakin not falling to the dark side and becoming Darth Vader. Will Naruto use Tailed Beast Sage Mode against Pain since he has Kurama's cooperation? Will Naruto's Nine-Tails Chakra Mode be able to manifest a chakra avatar like Minato's does in canon? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want. Anyway, awesome story and keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter, naruto started his sage training, hope some plot twist coming from the starwars part and force and not copy-paste canon pain invasion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol,Bee pulled a fast one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's hoping that Naruto's Sage Training goes well and I wonder if you will add in The Bad Batch for this and the sequel, as it'll be interesting how different things will be, since Naruto showed up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tftc and ik u said no bad batch but do you plan on adding some from rebels to build up to the ot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work on this chapter and glad the training is going well, but now trouble is coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Palpatine made a clone of Anakin. But that's impossible no one can clone a jedi or sith or force users it's never been done. Just like Rahm Kota said. Well there's two X1 and X2. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() Add Sakura to the harem honestly Naruto should have been paired with her not Hinata I mean Hinata is a nice girl but she didn’t earn Naruto’s love. All in all good story keep up the good work. Also Naruto as he is would mop the floor with yahiko. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cant get enough of this story, absolutely love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, looks like Naruto's gonna become a Sage now and I wonder how the Jedi will react, when they sense Naruto in Sage Mode (and if his Force abilities will increase, while in Sage Mode). Glad that some Jedi and clones free from the chips in their heads are at Konoha, as they'll be able to help protect the village, when Pein shows up |
![]() ![]() great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Though a minor criticism, if you would allow me such, is that when alternating between between the storylines of Naruto and Star Wars Naruto seems to change in maturity. The first part of this chapter Naruto is all for holding back and building up the Jedi’s power, which would be normal for him since he took five years to train and mature, but in the later part of this chapter Naruto is all in for rushing ahead without a plan to attack a strong opponent, which does not show the same maturity. Perhaps, if you could, try to reconcile how Naruto acts with both parties so that it is consistent. Though as I said, before, this is only a bit of minor constructive criticism, and overall, I have enjoyed this chapter and the rest of the story very much. |