Reviews for My First Time
avp60685 chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
cute story! reminds me of something james in the spin city series would have told the others when things were boring at the office!
Kiz chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
This is not an original work - this rhyme has been in circulation for decades. It also has absolutely no relation to Spin City. Pitiful and lame.
Case Number 241 chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
i've read that before! that so was not original!

shot at James, ne?
Nanaki BH chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
I have never actually seen the show... but that was GREAT. XD Wow... Wow...
It kinda sounded like a rap or something. But man, that was hilarious!
tcahrmedone1988 chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
ur talkin about james?
jaka ray chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
hahah! you really know how to write this stuff! i seriously thought you were talking aobut... *nudge*

of course, the really big letters at the end caught my eye.. why is this spin city? is it charlie or mike?
lildevil chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
haha, funny. i thought you were talking bout... well you know. funny