Reviews for The Conquering Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting so when the next update happens or it gets to forty then i will read more. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Surely you won't choose one that is annoying. |
![]() ![]() Oh come on, you put all those lovely girls in the pool orgy and then you don't actually write it, that's not fair. You should have written a complete smut for that sequence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh new chapter :D Can’t wait for the next one XD Keep up the excellent work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() By the way mate I’ve found your fanfiction through another site (Webnovel). I don’t know if you gave the individual posting on Webnovel permission to do so, but I just wanted to let you know since it is your work. I also suggest that if you do end up having the novel on Webnovel removed, then you should post on there and scribblehub to build your reader base! A lot of readers on that platform have enjoyed your work a lot. Lastly the story has been great so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Be cool if you gave Issei the power to turn his girls into partial dragons. Like when canon Issei gave up his arm but you could take something else like the heart,lungs or eyes. Then his girls could live longer and be strong enough to defend themselves. He could also take something from the deal, like maybe each turned part lets Issei use an extra boost from Draig |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another anime only fanfic writer huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what happens next. You know the girls winners probably want that date/sex date with him lol. You know the mothers that seen him definitely want a piece of him too lol. |
![]() ![]() Somehow and I don't know how but I landed up on your story. Haven't read much of your stuff so this might be a bit impetuous, however I gotta say the smut in this was extremely lame and uninteresting. The problem ain't with the smut actually, it's the conversation in between which is the problem. Who says stuff like that while having sex? Tsubaki and Issei were having a perfectly fine conversation, what people have a normal conversation while rutting with each other? Generally it's moans or screams, some dirty or lewd talk. The things they were talking about while having sex were absurd and didn't make much sense for someone partaking in sex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah, that's just ridiculous. It's canon that devils can and do have harems, be it peerage, or otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love to see some more chapters and could dial up Issei's OP lvl |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but Issei didn't have to kill the dude! He could of teleported to the guy's bedroom in his Balance Breaker and scared the crap out of him while taking the drugs and frying them. But he went and killed the guy. And then there's Irina and Mono. You know the they might start seeing Issei a bit different after a while. At least any normal person would. Anyway, that'll my opinion. Still a good chapter. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You were not lying when you said a LOT of lemon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure I didn't say this before so I just wanted to say that I love that Tsubaki is one of his lovers. Her scene was one of the best yet. |