|Reviews for The Hitter's Girl|
| Elizabeth chapter 58 . 7/16
Great job keep going
| Elizabeth chapter 57 . 7/13
Love this story keep up the good work
| Maethoriel Artemis chapter 2 . 7/3
I do enjoy watching Leverage and this is pretty good so far. However, you do need to edit this a bit. You need to separate the bits where people are speaking so it flows better.
It should go something like this:
"Excuse me, Miss Newton, Mr Spencer? Yeah I know about you guys", he said.
"Then you know its a good idea to walk away from us now", Eliot growled, his southern accent showing.
I did the exact same thing when I first started out. Didn't know it was wrong until someone pointed it out to me. But other than that, keep up the good work!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 50 . 5/31
I loved this episode and you did it beautifully! Keep it up!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 49 . 5/30
Wow. That was good! I'm really living the switching povs. This wasn't one of my favorite episodes, but you did it well with Kaira in it. Keep it up!
| William Hoenicke chapter 49 . 5/27
Hey lady what the hell is up with chapter I can barely read can you fix it up please so I and other readers be actually able to read this chapter ok
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 48 . 5/20
I love what you're doing with this and I absolutely LOVE the switching povs! Keep it up!
| Elizabeth chapter 47 . 5/5
Love this story
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 47 . 4/30
I love the switching povs! You did amazing with it!Keep it up!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 46 . 4/15
That was great! I love the first person pov that you did! I can't wait for the next season! Keep it up!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 45 . 4/3
Oh that was sooooo good! I absolutely LOVED it! Please keep it up!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 44 . 3/21
Oh I love this one! I love how Kaira makes the team act more like a family. Keep it up! I can't wait for more!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 43 . 3/6
Oh that was a good one! Keep it up! I can't wait for more!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 42 . 2/21
I loved it! I can't wait for more! I get all giddy every time I see that you updated! Keep it up!
| Black Dragon 42 chapter 41 . 2/4
I LOVED this one! I like how u put Kaira in the story! Keep it up!