Reviews for Daeron the Worthy(Jon Snow SI) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() sigorn and sansa,,, interesting hahahaha |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Reach’s goose is cooked. They have no defence at all, for supposedly land of the mightiest Knights. It was amusing to picture Petyr acting like reek. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could have had Tyrion write under a pseudonym and do a gulliver’s travels book and him being in a new land where everyone is small and he is the giant. Interesting thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's disappointing that you have chosen to pair Jon and Daenerys. I had hope for a unique pairing but oh well... |
![]() ![]() I am confused here. Jon just went into a rant about how them declaring robb king fucked him and the north(hes not wrong). Then they immediately declare him king in the north? Maybe I am miss reading it but shouldn't they be calling him king of westeros since they need the south. The riverlands will not be the only lands swearing fealty to the north. They already saw what happened by being a badly defensible kingdom and deciding to cede with the poorest kingdom barring iron islands. Plus the fact jon doesnt have tully blood and robb screwed them in the war means they wont join him unless he conquers everything. Are they declaring him king of westeros? Only way I can see what jon wants working while still being king is declaring himself king of the continent. Confuses me why they're calling him winter king then. |
![]() ![]() I hope that Jon does not end up with Alys. Jon x Dany |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea I kinda agree that Tarly should have remained neutral I mean why would he chose between a queen who bombed their Vatican or Mecca( how the fk she remains a queen without blaming everything on Danny or Tyrion, Coz u know one is from a family of Arsonists and other is one who played with wild fire resently.) and another who come on ironbron ships with slavers. and finally some sane governance from Danny. thanks for the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what about Jon/Sansa? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Lyanna Mormont ia always enjoyable to read. It’s sad she killed in movies. I can’t wait for Arya killing Frey! Lol. Hmm.. there’s both positive and negative of conquest. I agree it bought trade etc but at the same time the new gift is given to Nightwatch. That area is one of most fertile in north if I’m not wrong. There’s no andal invasion but there’s many war that happen in south too. Etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how the noose is closing around Ramsey. I wonder what he will do now? Dany’s compromise about Lys is practical, but it is something weird. As far as ending goes, you needed Robett to England the cheesiness LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you don't mind, but I download now every chapter as HTML and replace every Daeron with Jon. The story is good, even if it gives me this feeling of being a bit in a hurry to get somewhere. I am following it and finding it enjoyable so far. But I highly doubt Jon would change and so easily accept his name in private thoughts/interactions. I think he will always be Jon, and wear Daeron as the public relations name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. I hope you decide to finish in the next three chapters with the North Recovery arc. since Jon has to take back the Riverlands as well as bring the lands of the West as well as the Iron Islands to their knees. Another issue would be for you to start showing what's going on in Dorne and on the Reach. personally I would say that the news of Jon 'Daeron' Targaryen with his dragon and wolf at his side should be spread. It will be interesting to see the reaction of the golden campaign xD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You called Sansa, Santa in this chapter. Also why does Jon want to be called Snow when that basically calls him a bastard which he is not. Jon Targaryen would be better than Snow or even Stark. |