Reviews for Daeron the Worthy(Jon Snow SI) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() House Umber broke faith with House Stark so Ned Umber, the last surviving Umber, should be sent to watch. Someone loyal to the Starks can be rewarded with the lordship. By the way, Jon's personality seems more cruel to his enemies than the books so I wonder if he is planning to wipe out Freys to the last baby... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont think so, i was thinking more about jon using rune magic to enchant the armor and sword of his army. example would be to make the sword weight less or effective against the wight, armor that has temperature protection and also less weight. anymore usess but not OP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter Keep writing. Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones |
![]() ![]() Jon needs to take House Umber to save Rikon from being given to Ramsey. |
![]() ![]() ...hiding HER fiery head... Day's biggest error was favoring one dragon over the others to the point of chaining the two that did nothing wrong in the dark while making no effort to control Drogon. She moved to fast in her conquests and never consolidated her hold on the first city before moving on to the next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jon’s topping through the north with a vengeance. It’s a shame Rickon wasn’t at last hearth anymore |
![]() ![]() Aegon as a name for Jon Always sucked ! Jea, Aemon, Any other seems better ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you can still have alys have an important part even without a tag so idm . love the way jon used his warging , hope he keeps getting better at it since becoming something like a warg king sounds awsome imo . Btw , why isn't he searching for other skinchanging etc. ? surely there are some wildings able to do it , even better if they are young since he could then form their education himself . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Randyll Tarly sees Dany as someone who was not raised in westeros leading an army of foreigners, that make him choose Cersei and of course ambition and retribution against the Tyrell for many sligths of the past. The iron bank Is not bravos while it resides in bravos and holds great influense it Is a bank, whit investments in many things including slavery while not public it Is an open secret so to say. Bravos Is against slavery but there are those who seek profit any way they can outside of it. I believe there are two faccions against profit whit slaves and those who just dont care the means of profit. Alys karstark Is on asoiaf only, i think, while she apeares in the show she Is not a true character in it. okay i hope this help un any way, i realy enjoy your stories and i want to keep reading them. Please dont take the story to a weird place like many promising stories end. You are on the right path so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, especially jon's warging, i loved it, after this episode you would go more on a jon x alys to correct robb's bullshit, ok you can find some jon x alys here if that can help you . To counter your answers for a jon x sansa, they would obviously have a difficult relationship (no sex because of the torture and rape of sansa) but they are much more than brother and sister, content that she was never a sister in the past and that she will learn that he is not her brother at all and despite his mask she emotionally needs a lot of help. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While bravos don’t deal in slaves- the iron bank trades with all the essos cities. And with what daenerys did(conquer cities with no plans on how to replace their economies) they probably started loosing money due to the sudden stop of trade between the cities. People like to say that she was against slavery- but forget that she had slaves of her own and was a part of a society whose main trade was slavery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please make John and Dani a couple! And please, when Dani finds out about her nephew, make her think not only about the throne, but also about the fact that she has a family. It was fucked up on the show that she cared for the throne in the first place, when in fact she wanted to have a family since Viserys died. True, she can get angry until she finds out the truth about the rider. Please let her get a family first! Looking forward to new chapters as much as possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eyes eyes everywhere even in my Brains theres eyes! always have two or three crows around you for EYES! EYES ARE THE ANSWER TO LIFE! SO ALWAYS HAVE EYES ALL OVER YOU ESPECIALLY IN THE BRAIN! sorry I've been reading too much Bloodborne lore. |
![]() ![]() I think Dreadfort is the castle he will wish to strike, but Karhold makes for a good hostage in Alys Karstark and Last Hearth to take Rickon from the Umbers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter. Which castle would Jon attack with such a small squad? well I doubt that it is Winterfell, although there are rumors of secret passages that could get people out of it (the master spoke of them to Theon) and therefore introduce them I doubt that with such a small force it is advisable. It could well be Kar bastion or the Last Home, if Rickon is still with the Umber he would bet on their bastion. Keep writing. Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones. |