Reviews for Daeron the Worthy(Jon Snow SI) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is that so? what a pity then.. anyway is it possible for jon to learn some rune magic? i think rune magic is the most less used magic in any GOT fanfiction story, and also has the most potential, afterall we know that the first men used this kind of magic before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm if I had to guess Jon is planning to visit the umbers to rescue Rickon. He wants a Stark for the lords to rally for, and Sansa is too much a risk because of her tendency to seek power. Plus the fact that the lords are sexist adds an additional obstacle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Tyrion it appears you've done goofed when it comes to the dragon. Can't wait to see Dany's reaction. |
![]() ![]() "This is my attempt to bring some modicum of sanity…" Yet you immediately dive into all the most ludicrous plot devices used in Jon Snow stories. Magically get visions of his parents/identity, warging into Rhaegal across the world, meeting the Three-Eyed Raven, and of course, the low hanging fruit of getting Dark Sister that every cheese Jon Snow fic uses. This doesn't breathe sanity into anything, it's an indulgent SI wish fulfillment, near-crack fic. It's INsanity by definition. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, if that's what people are looking for, but I certainly wouldn't try and consider it some masterpiece improvement over S7/S8, even if they were lacking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the update. Liked the part about sansa- I think too many people gloss over her mistakes and have everyone not condemn her for it- but I am fine as long as atleast sansa herself understands her mistakes and grows from it instead of repeating the same mistakes. And while I too think that Aegon is a stupid name that dd chose- if you consider that part of the reason rheager did what he did was his prophecy- if that prophecy had an Aegon in it- maybe hearing about the death of elia’s son Aegon pushed Lyanna into naming Jon Aegon- hoping that Jon would be the saviour that rheager dreamed of. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man that was 5k words? it feels like i just read a 2k word chapters. It only means that im totally hooked with story, i hope that you pay my theraphy, it only cost 1 chapters per day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep writing. Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it , please continue I hope that jon will go with sansa, he needs a queen stak to hold the north and she masters very well "the game" with his futuristic knowledge, he can isolate the north and turn it into a world superpower. the feeder and the army can be brought in essos (the rose company, the gold company ect) the freefolk have a knowledge of the mountains, where gold can be found. the dragonglass can be found on skatoss jon can theoretically use magic (the ice and fire prince) in addition to his infernal wielding of the sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have Jon keep Longclaw and Dark sister. Have him fight with both like Arthur Dayne, something he learned while with Brynden. Jon/ Daeron’s Harem Sansa, Arya, Margaery, survives the sept destruction. Mira Forrester, Sera Durwell, Cersei, Val, Katheryn Winnick or Georgia Hirst, Daenerys, Missandei, Ros, After she saw what Joffrey did she ran from Baelish’s brothel and decided to go home. Arrives after the Bolton’s lose the war. Mirelle, Kayla, Marei, Melisandre,- isn’t old. Kinvara, Sand snakes ( Tyene and Nym), Alayaya, Chataya |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good start. Looking forward to reading future chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well its good u didnt call him Aegon such a fucking stupid idea on top of a stupid season who names there son after his brother who is still alive at that point and its even worse because Aegon died so what lets replace him with another Aegon that wouldn't have fucking pissed off the dornish |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too many people try to say that Jon did not do a good job with the night watch. What more could he do? beg? Everyone already knew why Jon let the free folk down south of the wall- they just did not believe it- even after so many other crows saw what happened at hardholme. Out of more than 500 crows, less than a dozen of them were willing to go against him. |