Reviews for The Immortals
Tactical-Magician chapter 1 . 10/22
Good story.
chrisalake1997 chapter 31 . 10/12
Really good story I waant sure I would like it when I read the Description but I gave it a shot and I'm loving it good job
LordLucifer666 chapter 1 . 10/10
Not sure if it was just me reading it or the story but it seemed to be jumping over the place in the very beginning. Sorry I'm horrible at translating my thoughts
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 30 . 9/20
I will read this big involved story that fleshes out many different characters as more than background accessories. Thanks for bringing more interesting depth to your fanfic. Your way of involving characters beyond the MC while telling stories which build onto the ff isn't clumsy or half hearted the way many attempt to throw together.
George Cristian810 chapter 1 . 9/19
Many mistakes plus sasuke i am out .
Primarx chapter 30 . 9/19
enjoyed reading it
biginferno chapter 30 . 9/19
interesting story unique harem list I am happy to see Samui in it and I see you added Anko to it is there any chance Tayuya can be added to his harem as the final girl she's a strong kunoichi who'd fit in among the true kunoichi such as Samui,Anko,Konan and others and she'd definitely make things interesing she'd give Ino a hard time for being a fan girl
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 29 . 9/19
I'm lost again and still reading. Gonna sleep more maybe first.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 28 . 9/18
I'm confused and still reading to learn of the next elements added into blender then mixed up before put in fanfic somewhere.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 27 . 9/18
There was some psycho. Now what?
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 26 . 9/18
I'm just along for the ride. So much being introduced, still fun read for me.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 25 . 9/18
It's good. I'll read more. My bad brain is struggling still is fun read.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 24 . 9/18
Now that Naruto is married to a beautiful princess, Ino and other girls will want to be his women even more.
Primarx chapter 28 . 9/17
not very clear to me what happened to Emma after getting hit by an attack. did she just run away or something else?
Kurokawa Uzuna chapter 27 . 9/17
I enjoyed it, kinda has the outline of this world, and this one doesn't have DxD's law, i mean the supernatural, maybe there's but maybe the pillar is there, literally pillar, if you want to us to review, just ask, this story is one of the best outline, since even BB said, the outside world is dangerous, sure there's many people who could end up ending the world, and there's Chaldea, is it post Solomon, Four sub-singularities, or post Lostbelts means already defeating Beast VII, and the timeline outside is important, and I, I REALLY confused about the whole ino thing, Esdeath, Yuki, and Yukigakure thing... hope you made chapters like before, i could see what your dissapointment is but i didn't read your story from when you made the first chap so i didn't bother to comment every single chapter, even tho i laugh with the condition, This Story is good, yeah, and this one not made Naruto some kind of Villain with Bashing here and there. i like this story since one actually made one mixed with Fate, rare gold, and the fact there's BB and Emiya here made it Rare Elements, like Platinum level i guess.
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