This story was delightful. Thank you!

"Ganging up on a motherfucker is the Jedi wayMace Windu.

But seriously, this is one of my favorite stories here now, top 3. This is because I hadn't understood just how much of a tragedy Star Wars was until it was plainly layed out like this. Obi-wan was really put through the ringer. You turned Star wars into Lord of the Rings, where the strength of men didn't fail. Thank you for writing this.

I love it!
thanks

thoughts? godmned hillarious

YouTubers Channels called The Stupendous Wave does great in depth Starwars Lore video's like meaning behind each color ,different type Kyber Crystals and their abilities .

Orange saber well different .One YouTube does great Starwars subject and lore video's including Different Light Saber crystals and their ability ,mean behind each color and such .

last part confusing ?

I am the Seante that would ring some warning bells and like piss of quit number of the senate .

I have Sith Ocs has own code .he servant Darkside Servant to will of force yes use darkside he understand it much more any jedi will .it is Passion ,it is aggression ,it predator instinct ,with to act ,it destruction ,it is death ,it seeks to be test and to test it user use most find proper balance give to much it will consume you and give to little and will abandon you .
part of his own code is :
where their is passion their is serenity
Peace is the delay of conflict
were their ignorance there is knowlegde
through control power and through power control
No other master but the force
Where their light so to must there be darkness
through force all thing are possible
through will of Force purpose
through that purpose freedom chains bind you
through force shell break chains of limits

think Ben just made Anakins day blasting up Slavers .it Christmas for Anakin .

Yep Jedi problem over-centerialization of all their forces ,traditionalism to point of stagnation ,to much control Senate has over them with no political power of their own ,to much focus on code rather then will of force ,Fear of self lead to not confronting and properly managing their emotions ,To much detachment form rest galaxy and selves lead to more individual prone to Darkside temptations ,Not enough will to act lead to being slow to act and predictable to enemies .

I very much enjoyed this fanfiction, I also look forward to reading your other stories as well.

Monkeywrench

My feedback is far from “meh”
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME

Thoughts? Reactions?

I loved it

overall I really enjoyed this fic but here are my critiques. Luke is too perfect. he doesn't really have any character flaws and seems to be good at anything. He hasn't seen the horrors of wars yet wad very calm when he was thrusted in one. Obiwan, was done very well. the only critique I have is sometimes he gets a bit too angsty for my taste. again overall a good story