This was absolutely amazing! This is the first fic I’ve read on (rather than AO3) and I loved it! I love just how well characterized all the characters were, and how the plot resolved itself so smoothly. It made me very happy :) thank you for writing!

Absolutely beautifully done! I struggled to put it down to go to work lol. That was some minor word issues throughout which a beta should be able to handle if you ever decide to get this cleaned up and perhaps published someday. Looking more to reading more from you!
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Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much and it was comforting.

I absolutely loved this story! Thank you for writing it.

Wheels fell off a bit there but for a feel good fix-it fic it fit the bill. Hope your life is treating you well and thanks for putting stories like this out there, it made my day a little brighter.

Some great lines in this chapter

That chapter got especially cracky. The whole interaction came out of nowhere. Still though, I’m here to see what direction you ended up taking them in.

Bobo Fett is a real clown.

(Giving this a shot, needed some cracky fic in my life).

Wonderful story. I really appreciate how you were able to keep characters so in line with canon and yet create an original and well thought out derivation.

There were a couple words that were switched with close-sounding words, but it was easy to figure out what you meant.
Thank you for sharing your effort and taking time to write this!
I'm glad that I stumbled upon it!

really great fic
will probably read your other ones as well, really easy to read it all in one go.
loved how everything changed.

That was awesome! That well-deserved dressing down was soooooo satisfying! There is definitely a reason Obi-Wan is my favorite character in Star Wars!

Confused on why she thought Luke could be Padme's son, when she says herself the age makes it impossibe (and he had revealed his age, before she picked up his traits).

You accidentally said 'cease' instead of 'seize'

Electric Judgment, also known as Emerald Lightning, was a light side Force technique used to spray electric bolts of variable intensity from the hands and fingers. At one time, it was classified as a forbidden Force power within the Jedi Order; however, some Jedi such as Plo Koon, Luke Skywalker and Jacen Solo practiced it.

Obi-Wan is rad. And things are going to get crazier!

Why the emphasis on swimming?